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2021-01-16 05:53

I'm loving it so far and the characters have depth to them. On top of that, the chapters are updated frequently. I don't know if it will always be this way, but so far we have seen multiple chapters a day. The MC is a great one too, and he has some pretty slick comebacks. His libido does seem to be quite strong though, but it won't get in the way of the story.

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Finally a rwby FF that seems original! Ans actually well writen as well ! chapter are a bit on the short side but that means they come quicker (no dick pun intended) it's a bit risky and daring to do a rwby FF that starts at the fall of beacon but at least we are spared the same S1,2,3, shenanigans that we saw so many times we can nearly recite them ourselves! It gives a lot of change from usual with a intersting character being one of the coolest grimm around. Also author you and your MC must be after my own heart doing a rwby harem story and have a MC that goes for our favorite australian rabbit girl... And with Neo in cover while cuping a feel on Emerald you only need to tear the BellaBooty away from the claws of that useless SSJ rip-off and forced sexuality change to please the community to make me a happy new fan! More seriously you really seem like a man of culture if your first chapter and book image are foreshadowing in any way doing a working and risked but intersting RWBY harem story with Velvet and Neo (and Blake man of culture ya'know) as first galz i'm already liking you! A counsel just don't make a harem too gigantic don't need 20 girls to make it work just some good Velvet cake, Neo-cream, Bellabooty, Sustrai with maybe some Yang or some Rubes, and a fill of Malachite, Sienha or Aslan to spice it up and we are already perfect! dunno if you are saving pyrrha at that point but IMO if ya do keep arkos going it doesn't make much sense if spartagirl fall for a lion just cuz it used cinder as a scratchpost Friendily from another man of culture (the good one!) ps: don't forget in flying battles if the enemy is behind.... DO A BARRELROLL!!

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