TLDR: There's not too many chapters so if you want a story about a OP father that has it's own unique flare you might as well try it. I am writing this as of chapter 7, the latest chapter, in hopes that it will get a rating and update more frequently. Writing quality: No easily noticeable grammatical mistakes. Word choice is also good. Stability of updates: This book hasn't existed long enough, so I gave it 4 stars cause only 7 chapters are out and the last one was 4 days ago. There is also no release schedule. Story Development: The author thinks things through. The story has just started, but I already like the direction it's going. Characters speech & word choice is determined by their characters experiences. You can tell. I do wish more information was given, but it's only chapter 7. Character Design: See the above portion. No major flaws yet, but as stated earlier, it's only chapter 7. Also, I wish the daughter wasn't as smart. It's not bad, but I can't say I absolutely love it. World Background: This was done nicely if you paid attention. Car models were given, familiar terms (like generals & soldiers) were used, and familiar ideas (like invaders & secret organizations) were used. The author made it easy to picture this world as it's not too different from ours. The only element I hope gets explained is personal strength. Personal feelings/beliefs/hopes: 1. A estimated release schedule would be nice, even if it's only once a week. 2. I would also appreciate an average word count. 3. More authors notes that explain why characters use certain words (like for the bakery), why characters take certain actions, and/or the authors narration/summary/ideas on the key events in a chapter. 4. More chapters. It's pretty self explanatory...
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