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aSleepyPenguin
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(1 Star) Writing Quality: It's machine-translated quality, not even using . ! ? or anything, and the worse part in my opinion is the way he does character speech. An Example: Ken: Hi Random1: Hi (4 Star) Stability of Updates: Meh, I'll see if it continues. (2 Star) Story Development: It's just cannon, hasn't done a thing yet. (Only gave 2 stars because of 1 scene that wasn't cannon) (3 Star) Character Design: Just your average character design. (1 Star) World Background: Little to no info, smaller than cannon. --- Overall, I'll keep reading because I have nothing to do and maybe update this if it improves or gets worse. Hopefully gets better. Good Luck!

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The Power of Espada in MHA

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Zick_Rander
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well i wrote about the speech as unnecessary people and will see them once you can and that's it. and i will try to add more background information. thanks for the feedback