Review Detail of Humbuub in The Novel's Extra's Extra

The grammar is bad, it's understandable but it's really noticeable as well. Story Development is frustrating as well, the only enjoyable part are the excerpts from the OG source, any Original content from author just made this worse. Character Design is bad, OCs and MCs are the worst! So edgy and unneccessary. I assume this is completed already so 5 stars for the updates. The World building is negligible, mid at best.