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2021-01-11 09:36

Overall, from the few chapters I have read it seems to be quite good. The writing quality is the only thing I have a problem with as there are a rather large amount of grammatical errors, mostly simple things like mixing up he and she, but it is still readable especially in comparison to many other works that are on this site. In conclusion, good read, but would be better if the author got an editor or used something like grammerly.

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Evil_Peppa
Evil_PeppaAuthor

Thankyou for review, I'm working hard to improve..I'm still new at writing :)

RandomNoob
RandomNoobLv14

Doing great. Keep it up.

Evil_Peppa:Thankyou for review, I'm working hard to improve..I'm still new at writing :)
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