Where is the romance tag? pfft it was funny to think that he's not a completely evil. Yes he is ruthless and selfish but base on his personality he's just a broken kid nothing more. He even told his pastlife to his Lover, he's not a mistake lol he's just a experiment.. not someone who has defied the odds, I might say that the pacing is good, the character development is also decent. The only problem is the vague type of writing and using words repetitive. like as if it' Nevertheless, Nonetheless. And describing the actions weakly. I'm not a good writer myself but I could atleast share my opinions to improve.

Let's assume that the sacred gear gave him knowledge about supernatural world. Plus I want to exploit some of his weakness sometimes, I don't want to write Gary stue who's completely logical everytime that's not a human person at all. But yea I'm working with that.. somehow If i don't get bored I will write heehehe

RWBY is pretty good choice but I'll leave the decisions after 2nd season

i want to leave DxD for a bit after season 2.

Dragon is kinda overused, God is a long way to go.

Noe, She already lost it to her former teacher

Not sure but I'm still looking for ideas and friendly beginner editors

Yah yah, I'm just changing the plot because I felt unsatisfied

maybe you can drink my milk

Most of the powerful organization that time was aware that Kojou is the successor, they just didn't make a move yet.

Thanks I will change i later, ugh so cliche

Bro? I'm not a bro tho, whatever

Welp i appreciate your effort to comment that, message me in discord so we can have a better discussion.

I like seduction aura

yes

yes it is cliche

Lol thanks

Whahaha marco busa is that you?

nwhha tf is that review

Lol I hope i was you, I didn't even get a free time because of work and studies. If I was born rich then maybe I would write for y'all guys hehe..