Review Detail of Dd_B in I Become Baby Mafia Boss

you should lower your use of foreshadowing. its ...really bad as it is. Crisis feels artificial, whats with everytime the biggest problem is the one accounted for? wtf bro? Everyone know jake is controlled but it still become THE probleme? just..no, its bs. Still have a good time but i tell you, i skip a lot of content, like 20 chapters all at once to get to the interesting part like i went from her being shot to jake breaking free...so all that work between was for naught, and all fillers and repetition of info dump stuck in important moment...learn to balance the rythme, its a real problem for me and theres an aftertaste of scam that is real bitter. when theres 3 chapter about bello thinking about his skills in war, or 3 chapter per skill of ghost saving the days...cheh