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O_Corvo
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2021-02-23 02:23

a good idea, but poorly implemented. It is not so bad to read if you ignore some elements of the story, but I hate Nerfs of any kind. Op is life !!!! fuc * protagonists xianxia and jumpchain. weak-to-strong is garbage and only my opinion matters

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Equilibrium123
Equilibrium123Lv4

Dude he didnt get nerfed read the rest of the story

Elmarc_Yarka
Elmarc_YarkaLv13

Looks someone never actually read a good book

Aisumnetes
AisumnetesLv2

I mean, I would want him to start of weak, a bit stronger than mortals to show hoe strong mortals are. Also the mc is Xianas or whatever do have sometype of power progression.

Aisumnetes
AisumnetesLv2

How*

Aisumnetes:I mean, I would want him to start of weak, a bit stronger than mortals to show hoe strong mortals are. Also the mc is Xianas or whatever do have sometype of power progression.
Donovan_Mullin
Donovan_MullinLv4

I did not like when he got a kid. He has mire important thinks to do than raise some brat. He has to gte more powerful but all he is doing is jerking if on donna or induk

AutisticDumpBaby
AutisticDumpBabyLv3

lol op is life haha what a medium

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RUFFI
RUFFILv5

Well this is awful !! The author does not understand at all what the MARVEL universe is and what the Celestials are !! Reading this fanfic my brain melts !! The main character is the son of the Celestial !!! A celestial being is a multidimensional being whose body is born from the energy and matter of the whole galaxy !!! Here's a wiki: Title: Celestials. Classification: Multiverse Empire of the Cosmic Gods. Social Order: All Celestials are subordinate to the Supreme and the strongest Celestials. Age: Older than the first multiverse. Population: Many billions. Technologies and abilities: Manipulation of probability, manipulation of time, manipulation of gravity, manipulation of pathos, manipulation of matter, manipulation of energy, teleportation, manipulation of reality, immortality, extra causality, dimensional attacks, dimensional manipulation, quantum manipulation, manifestation, high-dimensional existence. Cosmic power is unlimited divine energy emanating from the astral plane of existence. Penetrating into the wearer, this power becomes his basis, in fact, replacing his soul, saturating his entire being, creating a unique aura. Cosmic force is a unique and universal type of energy that essentially gives the wearer access to fundamental interactions with the universe. Space travel is a cosmic force that grants its wearer the ability to cross space in a short period of time. The hosts are able to move from star to star with ease, and more. For the carriers of cosmic power, galaxies are "stops", and the entire universe is one big "highway". Energy Manipulation - Celestials are capable of manipulating any energy, in any form imaginable. They are able to create energy barriers, use energy attacks, sense any type of energy, transform it and absorb it. Absorptions are carriers of cosmic power, both capable of controlling this force and using it to absorb other sources of energy, to immediately attack the enemy, enhance their capabilities, or simply accumulate energy for any other purpose. Manipulation of matter - most carriers have control over matter, to one degree or another. And also for the majority, certain abilities come from this ability. Carriers should generally be capable of basic control of matter at the atomic level. They are able to create matter, transform, or simply destroy matter. Manipulations of celestial bodies - carriers of cosmic power, are able to freely control the movement of celestial bodies. Control the movement of planets, stars, the creation of black holes, and many other objects. The Celestials are likely capable of both using and triggering the Big Bang and Big Squeeze reactions. Increased physical characteristics - any carrier of cosmic power has a certain level of superhuman strength. Usually, the carrier does not focus on physical performance, but he is able to increase his physical performance proportionally, with the help of cosmic power. Huge size - Celestials are simply colossal in size, they are usually considered to be 600 meters tall, but some Celestials are as large as tens of kilometers or more. Technically, their size is unlimited, and they are able to grow to such a size that the universe can fit in their hand. Cosmic senses - carriers of cosmic power, are able to feel at a cosmic level. Most are able to sense a single atom, millions of light years away. However, this ability also covers other senses, and even those that are beyond the ordinary understanding of feeling. See other dimensions, the future, the past, see the soul, astral essence, auras and much more. Celestials, as the strongest users of cosmic power, are able to see and feel everything that was, is and will be in the entire multiverse at the same time, as well as the higher dimensions. Cosmic resistance - most carriers of cosmic force have basic resistance to all kinds of influences that can affect the carrier. As a rule, most of them are able to feel normal in the vacuum of space, withstand sudden changes in temperature and also have some other resists. Celestials, however, have resistance to any impact, at their level. They can only be defeated by their superior level of abilities. Etc!! The author portrays the main character as an ordinary mortal with little strength, although he is already more than 60 years old at his age, other galaxies are already being destroyed !! Gaia the elder god, her abilities are also amazing. And many more mistakes !! Translated by Google translate

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