webnovel
Yuri_yuri
Yuri_yuriLv43yr
2021-01-10 11:21

at the moment i am liking it a lot ... it is very good with only 3 chapters ... but do more than ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍ ‍

Liked by 6 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
RUFFI
RUFFILv5

Well this is awful !! The author does not understand at all what the MARVEL universe is and what the Celestials are !! Reading this fanfic my brain melts !! The main character is the son of the Celestial !!! A celestial being is a multidimensional being whose body is born from the energy and matter of the whole galaxy !!! Here's a wiki: Title: Celestials. Classification: Multiverse Empire of the Cosmic Gods. Social Order: All Celestials are subordinate to the Supreme and the strongest Celestials. Age: Older than the first multiverse. Population: Many billions. Technologies and abilities: Manipulation of probability, manipulation of time, manipulation of gravity, manipulation of pathos, manipulation of matter, manipulation of energy, teleportation, manipulation of reality, immortality, extra causality, dimensional attacks, dimensional manipulation, quantum manipulation, manifestation, high-dimensional existence. Cosmic power is unlimited divine energy emanating from the astral plane of existence. Penetrating into the wearer, this power becomes his basis, in fact, replacing his soul, saturating his entire being, creating a unique aura. Cosmic force is a unique and universal type of energy that essentially gives the wearer access to fundamental interactions with the universe. Space travel is a cosmic force that grants its wearer the ability to cross space in a short period of time. The hosts are able to move from star to star with ease, and more. For the carriers of cosmic power, galaxies are "stops", and the entire universe is one big "highway". Energy Manipulation - Celestials are capable of manipulating any energy, in any form imaginable. They are able to create energy barriers, use energy attacks, sense any type of energy, transform it and absorb it. Absorptions are carriers of cosmic power, both capable of controlling this force and using it to absorb other sources of energy, to immediately attack the enemy, enhance their capabilities, or simply accumulate energy for any other purpose. Manipulation of matter - most carriers have control over matter, to one degree or another. And also for the majority, certain abilities come from this ability. Carriers should generally be capable of basic control of matter at the atomic level. They are able to create matter, transform, or simply destroy matter. Manipulations of celestial bodies - carriers of cosmic power, are able to freely control the movement of celestial bodies. Control the movement of planets, stars, the creation of black holes, and many other objects. The Celestials are likely capable of both using and triggering the Big Bang and Big Squeeze reactions. Increased physical characteristics - any carrier of cosmic power has a certain level of superhuman strength. Usually, the carrier does not focus on physical performance, but he is able to increase his physical performance proportionally, with the help of cosmic power. Huge size - Celestials are simply colossal in size, they are usually considered to be 600 meters tall, but some Celestials are as large as tens of kilometers or more. Technically, their size is unlimited, and they are able to grow to such a size that the universe can fit in their hand. Cosmic senses - carriers of cosmic power, are able to feel at a cosmic level. Most are able to sense a single atom, millions of light years away. However, this ability also covers other senses, and even those that are beyond the ordinary understanding of feeling. See other dimensions, the future, the past, see the soul, astral essence, auras and much more. Celestials, as the strongest users of cosmic power, are able to see and feel everything that was, is and will be in the entire multiverse at the same time, as well as the higher dimensions. Cosmic resistance - most carriers of cosmic force have basic resistance to all kinds of influences that can affect the carrier. As a rule, most of them are able to feel normal in the vacuum of space, withstand sudden changes in temperature and also have some other resists. Celestials, however, have resistance to any impact, at their level. They can only be defeated by their superior level of abilities. Etc!! The author portrays the main character as an ordinary mortal with little strength, although he is already more than 60 years old at his age, other galaxies are already being destroyed !! Gaia the elder god, her abilities are also amazing. And many more mistakes !! Translated by Google translate

DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14
LENX
LENXLv4
YogSothoth805
YogSothoth805Lv14
Related Stories

Marvel in Between Flesh and Steel.

In an surprising turn of events, Alex wakes up in the Marvel Universe(AU), problem is he had limited knowledge about Marvel. He only know some of the well known heroes, villains and lurking dimensional gods. He did his best to adjusts to this new reality, though not a genius like Ironman, he decides to adapt to this reality by starting a tech company he called Arasaka, hoping to strike it rich. During his undertaking, Alex finally gotten his wish, a half arse Golden Finger. That gave him advanced knowledge about technology, including cyberware, futuristic vehicles and weapons from games and movies like Skynet from Terminator. Empowered with this newfound knowledge, he transforms into a tech-enhanced superhero Navigating the challenges of the Marvel Universe. Authors Note: The Technology he will mostly use are from Terminator, Predator, Cyberpunk. I’ll add more as the story goes. There will be no Harem. I’ll try not to write romances as well so no Smut. I’ll have the main character focus in technology, sorry no magic. MC will appear as he has limited knowledge about the marvel verse. MC only knows about MCU, Spider-man Cartoons and Movies. A few clips he have watched from his previous life like Dare Devil. FAQ: 1) Is this business focus: No its not, There will be parts but not much. 2) There is a chance for romance depends on how the story goes. Note: I don’t know how to write stories. Believe me I tried. I’m just glad that I am able to accomplish one of my bucket list with the help of ChatGPT. Please be gentle lol. I know its gonna be bad, as again I don't know how to write in English and its not my native language. Its not even my secondary language, its not even the third since we have lots of languages, where I’m from. Any helpful criticism will be greatly appreciated. I'm just doing this for fun and hopefully when I actually try to write another story, it will be better.

Ashinydecapod · Movies
3.6
102 Chs