Review Detail of Aevitas in I'm the person who will cherish you

The grammar and spelling is kind of all over the place, but I am guessing that is due to being new to English. It is difficult to learn English grammar, but using something like Grammarly or just Google docs can greatly help in that department. Otherwise the story is pretty generic, Orphan girl is bullied by the rich popular person. There hasn't been much development so far.