Review Detail of NxtDoorDuDE in One Piece: Reborn as a Skypiean
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what should I say... Starting of story was good but gone down to drain later. I mean a planet level inflated to universe level. And it's inflated very fast in fight with marines was alright as you put in supposed to be but then, well I nothing else to say as writer's imagination. Your writing quality was better than me so 5-star so for speed of updating. Character design was good but not on full potential. Story development was good until just before end. I am not criticizing you but in good stories we don't inflat story like this. There is many stories where introduce bigger world then he was writing but that thing take process not like here where we just dump info at once. For future, please introduce bigger world step by step, like planet to solar system to star system to galaxy...
One Piece: Reborn as a Skypiean
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Interesting statement, but I disagree because of the context here. Your statement would have been perfect, if this was an original novel. But this is a Fan Fiction, to its core. I can't, step by step, move away from the One Piece world and slowly increase the power level, as at that point nothing of 'One Piece' would remain. That's just another novel of its own, right?
Yes, I totally agree with this is a fanfic. Pace was good then face of story changed like flick of coin. It fanfic so author can do whatever he wants. It just my opinion that this flick just brock the rhythm.
Master4thWall:Interesting statement, but I disagree because of the context here. Your statement would have been perfect, if this was an original novel. But this is a Fan Fiction, to its core. I can't, step by step, move away from the One Piece world and slowly increase the power level, as at that point nothing of 'One Piece' would remain. That's just another novel of its own, right?