I LOVE IT. GIVE ME MORE. YOU ARE LUCKY THAT I THE GREAT GOD OF CLICHE IS WRITING A REVIEW FOR YOU. But honestly this is one of the greatest One Piece fanfic I’ve ever read, the mc character development is great but I think it can do better than the forced one you did(but no matter well done) Mc’s power ups are gained... well the devil fruit is stolen but still... The story is paced very well and I like how the mc thinks before he acts even though sometimes he is a bit ritarded (he’s a little bit confused but he got the spirit) And the schedule is consistent so its a plus for me.
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