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Review Detail of LoveJoy in One Piece: Reborn as a Skypiean

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I could say that this type of fanfiction is starting to be so much bothering that the word Evil MC become disgusting. Did you ever find someone who try to make so much reason for something they do this it. Their reason were so saturated that you automatically started to grit your teeth and look away. I'm starting to think if ever some author started to feel if their characters are even alive? Their characters, motive and ideals become so shallow that even if I try to justify it with long prologue that just become a garbage that won't be remembered 'Wasted time'. I'm ranting because you created a MC who feel so paper thin that will be forgotten after an hour or another facfict came out. Focus on one thing, please... you want power? Make it with adventure, Fuck it was full of vengeance that it feels so disturbing at the start. He is already an Emo at the very start. The world is create to facilitate the fantasy of people bro... The great wide world, then you painted it just red and black, done.

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One Piece: Reborn as a Skypiean

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