After my first glimpss of the book, the synopsis intrigued me already! I noticed the layout was easy to read and was written neatly. There are few certain grammars but still okay plus, something bothers abit.. there's few lines u add as "...." dots a lot and I don't think you need to out that way but it's okay..hm next is, the plot is interesting and pleasant to hear how it flows however, there is this one chaptet that wasn't explained properly and went into to fast pace. But still good so far, and keep up the good work :3
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LIKEFlower_Looks:Thank you so much for your review dear. And I will try to correct the mistake I made and about the rush chapter....don't worry I have keep it like that because it gonna be explain in coming chaptersđ