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N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv23yrN0_Hope

I like as many other people a kiky MC who likes harem and such but making the system a real girl is just patethic thing that only appears in Chinese shtty novels when they try to make a ff of isekai. Even the kinky thing with his mom is ok but why IN HELL do you need a mindless new harem girl when she is the system? So you are going to make a bodie and then you loose your software of system ?? Or maybe you'll justify that once she has a bodie another " system inteligence " will magically appear ? I like DBZ and i like isekais but why using chinese bllshit is still a mistery . It's not good, lowers the quality and makes the story soo muuuch more confusing.

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The Magnificent System of the Multiverse

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I can understand your concern and your personal problems with these additions but all of them have an explanation and no I do not plan to give the system an body, It was merely an personality choice that Tojiro desired. Think of it like having your own personal voice assistant that strokes your ego. That's her main purpose to stroke Tojiro's ego. But thank you for the review

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N0_HopeLv2N0_Hope

Havin ego is good and to have someone that reminds MC that he is special is ok but this is way over the line of ego . Being in DBZ only guarantees any decent MC to have an awesome harem , why to ask for a brainless slave "mind " is still so low on quality . You started something that could have gone in a nice way but when ff touch even the slightes the chinese ff idea then it complete makes the ff a piece of sht.

DimensionLord:I can understand your concern and your personal problems with these additions but all of them have an explanation and no I do not plan to give the system an body, It was merely an personality choice that Tojiro desired. Think of it like having your own personal voice assistant that strokes your ego. That's her main purpose to stroke Tojiro's ego. But thank you for the review