DimensionLord
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DimensionLord3yrReplied to N0_HopeIt was due to the placement of Dragon ball and mere misplacement of memory, even though he is a genius he can still make mistakes stupid mistakes yes but still mistakes, He is Human after all not perfect yet.
So Tojiro promptly did something that any sane person would do, run away from these creeps! He immediately started running fast behind them and going to reach his house.Tojiro didn't expect that there will be those kinds of people in the world of Dragon ball of all places and he knows that based on his assertion of his current physical strength compared to back when he was alive in his old world, he wouldn't be capable of handling those two in a fight if forced too and with such his small size, he can easily be overwhelmed by them just holding his body still.- DimensionLord3yrReplied to N0_Hope
I have explained that he has gain this ability due to drinking his mother's milk and turning into Ki, Ki in dragon ball is Lifeforce energy that enhances both spiritual and physical abilities which is why he is even capable of moving at such an age. Due to literally milking the ki off his mother in order to move.
As Tojiro reached his destination back home and gotten 3 notifications as he tired himself out from running, he checks his golden screen as his system explained that he has just gained a total of an 0.3 increase in his physical perfection and he mentally deleted all three notifications that he was given as he doesn't have the time for that and walked back into the house and did his best in order to go back into the crib as he was in a moment of total rage in his mind but his system cut his thoughts off as he was in raging thought. - DimensionLord3yrReplied to N0_Hope
I never actually realized that it's a bit similar to Chinese cultivation lol.
[Well My lord,The M.P System separates three perfections spiritual,physical and mental perfection. There are different levels of perfection and the highest is True Perfection where you my lord will be capable of transcending all things and nothing from the multiverse will be capable of matching your mind,physique and spiritual essence. You're at the lowest form of perfection known as Human Perfection, you need to develop your physical, spiritual and mental strength till 100 in order to be perfect in the Human sense but when you level up, you will be able to transcend that perfection and go to the next level.] - DimensionLord3yrReplied to N0_Hope
I can understand your concern and your personal problems with these additions but all of them have an explanation and no I do not plan to give the system an body, It was merely an personality choice that Tojiro desired. Think of it like having your own personal voice assistant that strokes your ego. That's her main purpose to stroke Tojiro's ego. But thank you for the review
- DimensionLord3yrReplied to GodkingofOmniverse
Alright thanks for the suggestion.
Should I go and try to write my own novel or keep all my focus on this fanfic? - DimensionLord3yrReplied to FrightKnight88
the time skips? I never added any time skips in this book and I had established that The MC is lazy arrogant and overall an Jerk, I also formed his background by showing what was his life before he died and lead to his journey towards a Magnificent perfection. Even before his death I also shown that he had this idea that he is perfect and the system is just pushing his ego further and it will develop later in the story. Maybe I didn't convey it well enough for you so I'm sorry my dear reader. Yes I know my chapters are shorter than other Authors but I'm doing this out of fun and the length of all my chapters are based on my mood. My book isn't for everybody cause of this you don't need to continue reading it, Thank you for your opinion but please be a bit nicer about it instead of trying to insult my intelligence.
Ch 10 Chapter 10 - DimensionLord3yrReplied to FrightKnight88
I mean I already finished my prologue and yes I have read stories, I already established my character's background and his personality at the very first chapter and everything else is an continuation of that. Idk why you're acting like I never ended his prologue. By the way I didn't understand what you mean by prologue cause I was pretty sure I ended it at the very first chapter, which is why I was confused.
Ch 10 Chapter 10 - DimensionLord3yrReplied to FrightKnight88Ch 10 Chapter 10
- DimensionLord3yrReplied to Urion_Limitbreaker
Power Levels will exist but it won't be evaluated by the system as the system is supposed to make him the true most perfect existence in the multiverse trivial things such as Power levels won't matter to it. And maybe longer chapters the length of my chapters are based how I'm feeling with it.
Ch 9 Status and Plans - DimensionLord3yrReplied to Ryuuou_29
- DimensionLord3yrReplied to Spirits_everywhere