This is actually so good, I wish the mc wasn't gay cus I cant immerse myself, any way ill still keep reading but I skip nsfw parts so I dont scar myself, I like the originality of the mc's power and the fact there is some focus on Killer Croc. Its dope. Just please put nsfw parts to the bare minimum, don't wanna skip too many chapters
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LIKEI have the same problem. I was just reading a Fan-fic on The Originals/Vampire Dairies, and encountered the same problem. The story was 100% MC character development 100% and abilities 70%, but the emersion of the story broke for me when he started 💦 Finn. I tried to skip these parts but it was a 19 chapter novel, so I just dropped 🫳 it