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Fishball_22
Fishball_22Author4yr
2021-01-02 08:21

The author, I only has access with the anime version of this story and not manga nor light nove so the information I got might be limited. I'm telling this to avoid any confusion that may arise in the future. Though I'm encouraging the manga readers and light novel readers out there to do tell me in case you find any misinformation here.

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OhhhhNooo
OhhhhNoooLv10

Sub to a guy named AniNews on youtube he basically explains any and all changes in each episode. Plus he has other video’s related to danmachi that explains the gods, the power system...

GreekAres
GreekAresLv14

So whats the pairing? I’m voting for mc x hestia, I havent actually read it yet tho

Fishball_22
Fishball_22Author

Should edit this one. I got my hands on the light novel of this series yesterday. Perhaps because I'm so motivated? But I only got the first 10 volumes because they are not FREE!! If anyone here has the rest of the volumes, then please send it to me through email? I will really appreciate it.

Fishball_22
Fishball_22Author

I've been following that ever since

OhhhhNooo:Sub to a guy named AniNews on youtube he basically explains any and all changes in each episode. Plus he has other video’s related to danmachi that explains the gods, the power system...
Fishball_22
Fishball_22Author

it's harem . I put it on the tags already

GreekAres:So whats the pairing? I’m voting for mc x hestia, I havent actually read it yet tho
GreekAres
GreekAresLv14

Ohh im sorry, the harem tag doesnt show for me, No idea why

Fishball_22:it's harem . I put it on the tags already
SCP_0999
SCP_0999Lv4

the harem tag still doesn't show. I suggest you put the reason is some hard core members of non-harem roaming around they would put 1 star just because it's harem.

Fishball_22:it's harem . I put it on the tags already
Nitrox2
Nitrox2Lv4

OOF, how can you make so many grammatical error in the review of your own fanfic ? Why do a FF on a story you don't master ? You can found most of the important information in the wiki ...

Fishball_22
Fishball_22Author

oohh. Sorry for not being 'rich' enough to have everyday access in the internet.

Nitrox2:OOF, how can you make so many grammatical error in the review of your own fanfic ? Why do a FF on a story you don't master ? You can found most of the important information in the wiki ...
Fishball_22
Fishball_22Author

I got this photo after browsing the internet for around ten minutes or so ? And I liked it personally ,I still do . but if you have better ones then please show it to me. 😉

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Saint_Hubris
Saint_HubrisLv4

find* complaining about grammatical error?

Nitrox2:OOF, how can you make so many grammatical error in the review of your own fanfic ? Why do a FF on a story you don't master ? You can found most of the important information in the wiki ...
Nitrox2
Nitrox2Lv4

Yes.

Saint_Hubris:find* complaining about grammatical error?
Nitrox2
Nitrox2Lv4

Why writing your story in english if you need translating machine for simple sentence ?

Fishball_22:oohh. Sorry for not being 'rich' enough to have everyday access in the internet.
Lord_Rimuru
Lord_RimuruLv4

Why do you write your review at all if all you're gonna do is complain about people not using proper english, when you don't even use proper english?

Nitrox2:Why writing your story in english if you need translating machine for simple sentence ?
pathfinder1515
pathfinder1515Lv14

don't let him stop writing by giving bad reviews this is a one of the best danmachi story i found that doesn't suddenly give you a bunch of woman who like the main character in just a few chapters

Nitrox2:OOF, how can you make so many grammatical error in the review of your own fanfic ? Why do a FF on a story you don't master ? You can found most of the important information in the wiki ...
Allpowerful
AllpowerfulLv4

How are you going to complain about grammatical errors when you made like 5 just in those few short sentences?

Nitrox2:OOF, how can you make so many grammatical error in the review of your own fanfic ? Why do a FF on a story you don't master ? You can found most of the important information in the wiki ...
RexVector
RexVectorLv11

when will you update?

OhhhhNooo
OhhhhNoooLv10

Better

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Fellbane
FellbaneLv11

Try to wiki the timeline, you should find what you need there

WolfStar14
WolfStar14Lv4

Will you add R18 scenes ?

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