Long prologue and multiple people reincarnate into this world.... the transition from prologue to the actual story felt rushed and just didnt make sense at all. Story is not for me especially when the author said he isnt the only one that reincarnated.... wish I knew that before reading
Liked it!
LIKEhow did the prologue to the story feel rushed. Im not really complaining but I want to know why you felt like that. - The Mc as you can tell transmigrated not reincarnated. Not only did I not rush into the main plot of dxd. there's also 11+ chapters for just Aizen in the beginning from the time he arrived in the world excluding the chapters he made it out of the forest. So I don't really quite get how it would've been rushed. - The prologue was only 4 chapters not long at all tbh. I've read multiple ff with longer prologues. I understand it being too long for you but having chapters to show your character and how he is before getting reincarnated into a different world is important. Rushing reincarnations or transmigrations are far too easy you literally just have to say he was an orphan and he got hit by a truck and bam! No build up for the character. - Multiple characters getting reincarnated isn't so bad. Plus the only one I've confirmed is the love interest. The others I am still debating on. Plus its not like anyone will get powerups from Aizen. No one else will be the mc so I don't understand with the problem would be even if I added some of his old friends(which I am not certain of). Trust me there wouldn't be no love triangles or anything like that. Well anyways that was my response to the review. Thanks for reading and I hope you find something you will enjoy.
Eh probably for the best as well since I am not the biggest fan on OC love interests because to me they dont make sense if you are making a fanfiction but I already said the transition from the long prologue snd no this is a very long prologue for fanfictions on webnovel.. yeah there might be some that are longer but thats never really the case.... and the fact that it was a longer prologue the transition to hik just casually waking up as an experiment after getting hit by a truck and wven admitting thats its clichè idk to me if you put the effot into a prologue it shouldve been something more than just waking up idk maybe thats just me but regardless I hope you have a good one and goodluck with this and future projects!
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thanks man, I hope you come back in the future for future works and thanks for giving it a chance. Completely understand your points and I hope you have a good one!