Hi! Shameless author here, I'd like to say a few things before you read. -This is my first novel so there might be some grammatical errors -If you disapprove something then I'd encourage to be more constructive in your criticism. -This is a love between brother and sister, so if you can't stand this kind of forbidden love then this novel is not for you. -There will be NO harem in this novel. -Expect to have a lot of fluff and romance in this novel, so if you are not the type who is into romance and cute stuff then you might feel some of the chapters cringe worthy. -Aside from that there will also be a lot of kingdom and army building in this novel with some actions in it

Wow. The start of this novel is great and captured my attention easily right from the beginning. This is really good and I’m loving it so far. Haven’t read something this interesting in a while. I’m looking forward to where the author takes this novel and I’m excited for more. Expecting great things, there’s a lot of potential in this one.

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Its Good! Romance, No Harem, and Love between Siblings! I Recommend Reading it! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

The MC's give me Sora / Shiro vibes. Updates are stable (weekly). The WQ is good. I won't comment on plot or World building as it's still early and hasn't had time to develop. I will continue to observe with interest.

I love this so much so far hopefully the author will update more often so we can have more excitement?! How often do yoh think they are planning on updating?

Interesting story so far! I'm liking the original twist on how the world gets formed, can't wait to see where this story goes! Grammar and spelling are not bad at all. The only thing I have to complain about is that the author needs to write more often!! lol.

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Writing quality: Very good, nearly perfect, I can't complain Story development: Great start of the story, a lot of potential Character design: I love the siblings, the side characters are good too, hope they won't be forgotten Update stability: 6 chapters a week is really good World background: We don't know much but the start is already great I wonder what is the different between Elves and Angels?

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