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MaxAmx
MaxAmxLv43yr
2021-01-08 05:35

the part that the mc explains why he killed the berserker was kind of weird because in the series scott and his group always criticize who killed i think they wouldn't take it lightly criticizing mc, and now the pov was good and nothing confused in reality was better than in the third person that you normally write but not afraid to redicularize you just from my point of view, but the chapter was fine.

ALEX SALVATORE: THE WHITE TIGER (FANFIC OF TEEN WOLF)

ItIswhatItIs
4.3
17 Chs

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ItIswhatItIs
ItIswhatItIsAuthor

Thanks

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MaxAmx
MaxAmxLv4

author i don't know you saw anime bungou stray dogs the protagonist's power is to become a tiger but he could also transform parts of the body like arms and legs would be awesome if you did the same.

3yr

ItIswhatItIs
ItIswhatItIsAuthor

Well, guys, I think that the writing quality and the character design could be better. Other than that I think I wrote a fine novel at least for my first try.

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MaxAmx
MaxAmxLv4

hi author the story is good, but you make the story very busy and the lack of dialogues of characters like I thought that the hunters irritate to ask what the MC is but it didn't happen to spoil the story and people can stop reading for cause of that if you improve these points that i site would improve the reading of the story, but good job so far and hope that it gets better because i really want to read history involving tiger men in **** wolf

3yr
Stone_Grey
Stone_GreyLv3

Little annoyed that you stole my idea and charcter while literally only changing the last name, but whatever I guess. Good luck writing this.

3yr
Jeyrahmee_Sharp_3712
Jeyrahmee_Sharp_3712Lv14

Thanks for remaking thisπŸ”₯πŸ”₯

3yr
Radium9
Radium9Lv11

I was also reading white tiger and also thought it had potential but he just stopped so sad but thanks for making this novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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shiv
shivLv6

no harem please...... tired of reading those............................... .................................................................

3yr
salamander0
salamander0Lv13

it is good but will there be Multiverse travel and if there be this novel is definitely 10 star[img=update][img=coins][img=update][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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King_Drip34
King_Drip34Lv2

It seems interesting but you got all my stones when I saw it wasn’t harem.πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜™πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜Œ

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