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MaxAmx
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2021-01-06 22:50

hi author the story is good, but you make the story very busy and the lack of dialogues of characters like I thought that the hunters irritate to ask what the MC is but it didn't happen to spoil the story and people can stop reading for cause of that if you improve these points that i site would improve the reading of the story, but good job so far and hope that it gets better because i really want to read history involving tiger men in **** wolf

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Thank you I really like these kind of comments in which you guys my readers tell me what is lacking in my stories.

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