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2021-08-20 11:13

this is a great HP FF the author is really talented and this book is a good whetstone for him to brush up on his weak points personally I think he needs to pay a little more attention to background characters just an inch not a mile as is they only get shown when it directly ties in to the mc(I actually forgot his Griffindor friend's name and that he even had one besides Hermione). Keep up the good work hope to see an original from you one day

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Thanks for the review and words. You're criticism is right on the mark as well considering I'm terrible at making background characters interesting, definitely something I need to work on.

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