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asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv43yr
2021-01-18 00:11

deleted my old review, someone told me the author changes the canon and made harry in slytherin so i look it up and its actually true and then change my review, also good job to the author for not following canon specially he interferes and made harry go to slytherin and probably harry wont need to go back to the dursley, and you're right the butterfly effect is already strong it won't be possible to make everything the same as canon

The Wizard called Oz - HP

BoiGeorge
4.4
140 Chs

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BoiGeorge
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Hey guys the author here. Thought I should give a quick note about this fanfic. I'd like you all to understand before reading that this is the first story I've ever truly written properly. With that, there will be errors and mistakes at times and you all need to understand that before going into read it. I'm sure there's a million better ways to do certain things however I was only ever planning on writing this as something to occupy my spare time, next thing I know im climbing the power/collection rankings and I have a decent amount of people commenting each chapter. I'm grateful for all the comments and reviews so far and do take criticism to heart in order to improve myself but if you expect perfection, go read another novel. Some great novels HP novels I can recommend are The rise of the protector and I'm Voldemort. Thanks! :)

3yr

CodeSpectre
CodeSpectreLv4

Amazing ! Truly amazing !!The book is very well written and the chapter length is descent its neither long nor short and I hope the author doesn't drop it and keeps updating it at least weekly.....I'm really happy cuz i stumbled into two really good books today !!This one and the other one is called Rise Of The Magic Emperor-Fairy Tail !!!

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RobustIdiot007
RobustIdiot007Lv2

My god!, this many good ho novels are starting to rise,this may be the golden era of hp fabrics. This was just amazing,hope you continue and Don't pay heed to hate comments if you see them, they may just want you to stop writing because you're better than those pricks!hope you don't drop this and continue to update it.:).

3yr
Willian_Humildad
Willian_HumildadLv2

Yes, the truth is, I don't know how this work has so much audience I'll make it simple, it's not good ... the MC has no ambitions or a goal, it only learns magic because it has it, that's all, as in many fic cliches, it wants to help and engage relationships with the original mc making the work a follow-up to the canon, it does not aspire to show us something new or innovative about the magical world .. despite its desire it is super silly it does not take advantage of its potential at all nor does it have the smoked theories that every good fic has .. there are many things to emphasize in this work, it is not for me thank you author, I hope you improve

3yr
Manuekmgc
ManuekmgcLv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
NevoNeko
NevoNekoLv14

Love the fic, My only recommendations would be to limit the cultivation aspect and focus more on the magic. Elemental spells in Harry Potter ten to get neglected, perhaps explore bloodline traits like parseltouge and metamorphmagus. They had to come from a ritual or a contract of sorts🤔. since all gen1 wizards start from nothing, Honestly It would probably be more entertaining if oz doesnt limit himself and just test out of Hogwarts and just applies for the dark arts position himself after he explored the wIzarding world himself for a year. fics tend to always revolve around hogwarts the whole time. Especially since oz had almost already finished WIth the hogwarts library, Maybe head to romania and go see some dragons, instead of waiting for the goblet of fire. Could probably Do a little crossover wIth something else that matches the setting.

3yr
joao_gabriel_6283
joao_gabriel_6283Lv4

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3yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

This is a "god gives me wishes" story. ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........

3yr
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

While I did like the Book to a certain extent, it isn't amazing or fantastic or outstanding in any way or form and all the other 5-Star reviews don't know shit, typical Chinese if you ask me. Don't get me wrong, it isn't that bad, but the author made a really bad job with Original characters and I can't in any shape or form understand how the author can portray such amazing Characters in such a bad way! I would understand people changing characters so that they fit their world/Nobel but the author 'said' that he follows canon so the CH isn't changed. The Grammar is decent, and that's all I have to say. If the author wants to know how many stars I gave him in each category, then comment, because I am too lazy at the moment.

3yr
I_LOVE_MEGUMIN
I_LOVE_MEGUMINLv11

Who the love interest ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ??? ?? ?? ¿? ??? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ¿? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ?? ??? ??

3yr
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