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2021-02-21 18:18

wuv it ๐Ÿ’œ I really love the mc and her character development is Pog ๐Ÿ’œ ________________________________________________________________________________ ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’–โœจ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’œ I have a lot to say but if you're deliberating on wether to read it or not, read it! its worth it!

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Thank you for enjoying the novel so far! I hope to bring more amusement to your future days to come! Thank you :)

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It is I, the author! Yes, giving myself a shameless 5 stars review... This is my first creative writing, especially one shared with the world. As an author, I wanted to create a different world full of different people, all to enjoy being a creator. Sure, this creator may create some mistakes somedays, but I strive to make my creation as wonderful as possible! And this novel has room to improve, I do realize that, and I appreciate every comment and review and anything given. Even if you comment that I am missing a comma in the 5th paragraph, I am willing to edit that 5th paragraph. So do be willing to comment on mistakes and your thoughts!! A little info just if you are curious to read: - The MC does have a little narcissism in her blood, AKA the Princess Syndrome, but I try my best to keep it at a rate where you don't want to slap her face at every turn. 0-0 She has a life just like any other, just that she loves herself more than anything. - Avina's goal is to return to her own world to her best friend Bea. She seeks out friendship in every world, so Avina is not alone in these worlds. Plus, she has her trusty system, 5025! - There is a romance tag, and that is where I shall warn you. No, Avina does not have one of those going-into-worlds-with-her male leads. Instead, the romance will only be active if the original hostess had romance. So Avina is not actively seeking love, she just wants to go home. - 5025 is definitely not a super powerful system. Just a warning. Avina has her MC plot armor, but she's not always going to have a smooth sailing journey. There will be waves, storms, or her ship may have a hole. Author here shall have no sympathy in order to bring the greatest plot to life! If you are interested in my journey, there is a nice little Author Introduction/Diary chapter. :) It keeps my thoughts inside and shows how much progress I made so far. Makes me happy to write a new entry every time. Thank you if you do decide to read! It may be a bumpy start at first, but I strive to improve every day! By the end, I hope to bring the best possible amusement to my dear readers.

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