Item: The Merc with a Mouth in DC (Rewriting)
Rating: 5
Author: SKY702

SKY702Lv144yr

2021-04-01 05:17

Flat 5 star for the no harem tag Thats like having a goose with just another goose and also an egg, like what is going on with the other gooses that have more than one goose mates right everyone? So (repeat my self here and turn my argument upside down *dont forget to delete this note*) the egg that the gooses have is also just one that being said the goose mate can only be one. Ps: this is clearly not a review joking about the only 1star review this book has so yes take this 100% serious

The Merc with a Mouth in DC (Rewriting)

FanfictionLover2

4.6

18 Chs

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FanfictionLover2Author

I'mma give myself five stars. Because if I don't, who would? Lol, anyways I am not a perfect author, so mistakes could happen from time to time. If that time comes, then please forgive this author. Anyways, just read with your maximum effort if you like this book! And if you don't... Well, Godbless.

4yr

FanfictionLoverLv3

This is my 4th book. The 3rd was not published yet while my 1st and 2nd was still in the process of being rewrite. So please make do with this one, thank you. Hope you all would like the book.

4yr

Fury_123Lv3

I love this and surprised other people haven't given it a review yet.[img=recommend][img=update][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend]

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HarvaldLv5

Flat 1 Star for the no harem tag, that's not a feature. That's like a no pedo*phile tag and just shaming some people who like a harem and is not something inherently bad like pedo*phile's which I don't want in stories and still wouldn't be a feature. I personally am ambivalent towards harems in stories but noticed that they often make subpar stories and end in a sad s*ex fest and nothing else to show. If you want to tag it either tag it monogamous or single mc. Harem is a warning tag for people, no harem is a stup*id fad of the community to express their dislike towards harems. Else be consistent if you dislike same-*** relationships write no homo, don't like Christians no Christians, and if you dislike humans write no humans.

4yr

OnlyMeshaLv2

No harem? What disgrace!!!! You should make a harem flat 1 star!! You mongrels! Lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol

4yr

Jordan1908Lv4

One of the funniest DC fics I've read! Can't wait for deadpool to meet harley quinn. Can u even imagine the chaos. Gonna be fucking amazing. 😱😂😁🤞🏾

4yr

HarvaldLv5

The writing quality for fanfic is pretty high with only minor errors and the author even uses good spacing and I am not forced to read a block text. The only thing which I find slightly annoying is that he uses ALLCAPS for shouting. What I am ambivalent about is his use of many comic sounds, which is classic Deadpool and on one hand, a feature that shouldn't be missing, but I personally find a tad annoying in text, not in comics. For a person, without too much comic knowledge I can't say too much about the author's portrayal of Deadpool nor DC except that from my point of view he feels like Deadpool should act, and from what I've read in second-hand reports the only consistency in Deadpools comic career has been inconsistency between authors, which should therefore cover any minor discrepancies if they are even there. It is too soon for world-building or story development to say anything about it for now, except that it seems promising. Update frequency was vaguely described in the author's note and I personally would like specification even if it was just an "updates are irregular" notice. Helps the reader know it isn't abandoned if there is some break so they don't get antsy and the author saves himself self-imposed pressure, which I believe heightens the chance of an author to pick it up again after a break. The 4th wall breaks in this story are done really well and even I as a person who tends to dislike them was rather entertained with them. My other review towards the "no harem" tag factors into this one in so far that I was more lenient with the points. P.s. For those who say I shouldn't throw stones here's a little self-reflection. If I'd rate my own private attempts in creative writing they would be all flat One Star(and not because of tags) maybe 1.6 Stars if I gave myself pity points for grammar and writing. I'm just harsh with points to everyone including myself. P.p.s Do you guys know how tedious it is to write this with a broken laptop keyboard(the right side only works with brute force)

4yr

Stefan1266Lv4

I'm loving it so far but please continue. Oh and don't leave out some of dead pool comic and movie moments and also good and the very not so pretty the audience moment you know.

4yr

CanReadLv2

PLEASE UPDATE YOU FINISHED IT AFTER SHOWING HARLEY PLEASE I NEED WADEXHARLEY HSHSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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