Review Detail of Katzenliebe in The Queen Wicked Deeds

It's really really really funny and made me smile a lot of times from the sheer ridiculousness of the situation and just the general silliness. This, I can tell so far, is supposed to be something somewhat light and cheery with possibly some more serious things somewhere sometime so in accordance to that I don't really expect something like: And then she murdered her husband or whatever. I would say something that made me sort of hesitate was the personal pronouns. Um (nervous pacing) in the title, it's "The Queen Wicked Deeds" I think... (I think...) I think... it's supposed to be "The Queen's Wicked Deeds" or "The Queen of Wicked Deeds"? There are a lot of personal pronoun mistakes and they don't really cause a big huge massive destructive issue that decimates the story, but it's still there. I would also kind of want (I think just me... tbh) some insight into the world they're in. Like there's magic that can go pew pew and swords that go cut stuff and then there's kingdoms with weirdo kings. It would be awesome to have more description into the world they're in. I mean, we get a lot of Anne's Anne-ness and the King's weirdo-ness and the Queen being protecc and stuff, but there isn't really like direct information (There is a lot of implied information, enough for me to get a general idea of everything, political and social, but I need to think [I'm lazy]). I think it would be also better if information wasn't just sort of dumped onto the readers. Sometimes it's just bombshell... and I mean, in some circumstances that's needed, but in other circumstances it's not really practical. In a story like this, I would rather keep the readers guessing, messing with what they know and what they think they know so as to give them a huge surprise. It would be (for some people) entertaining to have people guessing things because it keeps us poor readers on our toes, ready for every tidbit of information because they're hooked onto this random dude's random life. Also, it'd be awesome (er) if the characters had more... idk how to say but maybe depth? Maybe it's because it's too early in the story, or maybe it's because I have strange and weird expectations, but I feel like these people are just... nice. And the bad people are just bad... (with maybe some background to make them not-so-bad). I mean, this is a cute story (very very cute) but these people have sort of a pretty bland-ish character. Like for instance, Anne, she's some CEO that is mischievous, but also shy, childish, and sort of a tsundere. Which works, but there should be some consequences to her tsundere-ness. And not like I-will-lose-my-lover-and-then-get-revenge-by-getting-a-better-guy, but real consequences (I'm not sure if there are going to be consequences but for now it doesn't really seem like it). Being a tsundere is cute in context, but it sometimes can be frustrating and her mischievous and somewhat mean behaviour shouldn't just be her mum scolds her and grounds her. Again, I'm not completely sure what the author has in mind for the future of the story, and I'm completely 100% willing to re-evaluate this if something does change. But for now, at this current level, I'd say that the characters are sort of too... happy... ... ... ... ... ... (I sound cruel Q.Q)