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Review Detail of Kotario in Darius Supreme

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Kotario
KotarioAuthor3yrKotario

So, it's the proverbial Author's review. Now, let me use this limited and much-visited space to clarify some things for those who are yet to read and those who have begun reading but are likely confused about some things. 1. In this novel, you are mostly spoonfed things, but a wealth of things are also left for you to read in between the lines. This novel was written with the intention of appealing to a thoughtful crowd, so erm... please make sure you fit that category. 2. Darius Stone, the MC, is not an edgelord as many expected from the synopsis. The comparison to Leylin Farlier from Warlock of the Magus world was not referring to their personalities or logical choices, but their moral choices. Unfortunately, some fellows came in hoping to see Leylin V2.0, not Darius Stone. 3. Darius is - as they say - isekai'd. Yes, but please - and absolutely keep this in mind as it is the whole point of the plot - he is not done so freely. He is brought to the world of Faust with a goal in mind, and majority of the actions he takes - whether you like it or not, or whether you feel its smart or not - are geared towards fulfilling that goal, which is to amuse the one who reincarnated him. 4, Please, for the love of God, hide your arrogance and ego. yes, the suggestions you made as to loopholes with the ability he acquires are grand, but you aren't the only one who can do 1+1. I, and the create/characters in the novel, can certainly think that far, and if it's not implemented, it means it likely would not work. This is in regard to the system mechanism as well as the ability. 5. If the above-mentioned things have bothered you, please use this as an official clarification for your doubts. If they haven't, please keep an eye out for them and when you encounter them, remember my words. It would make much more sense when you do. Thanks for reading so far. If you have read a bit and want to leave some praises, you can also make a review or let me know in the replies here or in comments (chapter and paragraph) in the novel. If you have criticisms, you can also leave those, and I will investigate and either give you an explanation, gratitude, or apology depending on the validity. If you are part of the typical crowd who like to insult first and think later, you are also free to leave whatever comments you have wherever. Just beware that, heh, I also insult back, and quite scathingly at that.

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Darius Supreme

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Little_Dino
Little_DinoLv5Little_Dino

Why did this make my laugh?

CrimsonPhoenix:?
CrimsonPhoenix
CrimsonPhoenixLv13CrimsonPhoenix

will this be a harem novel(hope not)

Lorddarkskin
LorddarkskinLv15Lorddarkskin

Shut up

CrimsonPhoenix:will this be a harem novel(hope not)
CrimsonPhoenix
CrimsonPhoenixLv13CrimsonPhoenix

?

Lorddarkskin:Shut up
The_F00L
The_F00LLv10The_F00L

Lorddarkskin:Shut up
Sirkeksalot
SirkeksalotLv15Sirkeksalot

is there ntr?

Kotario
KotarioAuthorKotario

nope

Sirkeksalot:is there ntr?
Eueo
EueoLv10Eueo

is there romance?

Kotario
KotarioAuthorKotario

Yup, but with only one fmc

Eueo:is there romance?
skippoli1
skippoli1Lv13skippoli1

I haven't read too far into the novel yet, but will there be a time skip at some point so he isn't stuck in the body of a little kid.

Kotario
KotarioAuthorKotario

Naturally.

skippoli1:I haven't read too far into the novel yet, but will there be a time skip at some point so he isn't stuck in the body of a little kid.
Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15Worn_out_by

Will there be kingdom building or any sort of things like it?

Kotario:nope
Kotario
KotarioAuthorKotario

Yup

Worn_out_by:Will there be kingdom building or any sort of things like it?
Kotario
KotarioAuthorKotario

Definitely

skippoli1:I haven't read too far into the novel yet, but will there be a time skip at some point so he isn't stuck in the body of a little kid.
Kotario
KotarioAuthorKotario

Nah

CrimsonPhoenix:will this be a harem novel(hope not)
Meds
MedsLv3Meds

SPOILER Is this like guild wars where (spoiler) 1 female lead and many concubines? (as my chapter right now)

Lord_Gr1mm
Lord_Gr1mmLv15Lord_Gr1mm

so i suggest to write down all the conversation in the comment section and in the review section and publish it in a book i guarantee its gonna be a hit,to be honest, it was more fun to read them then some of the books in this site :) On the story, i just started to read it so nut many opinions on that but it has an interesting beginning and hopefully, the FML will be also some one that will stand beside the Mc and not behind like in most novels as a decoration

Monarchofchaos
MonarchofchaosLv2Monarchofchaos

The writer said no to harlem and said one fml so I’m guessing no. I hope not might as well call it a Harlem then

Meds:SPOILER Is this like guild wars where (spoiler) 1 female lead and many concubines? (as my chapter right now)
Monarchofchaos
MonarchofchaosLv2Monarchofchaos

I hope the mc as only 1 wife no concubines or other gf. Tbh judging by his character he seems to be a loyal character and so one who knows to tell it how it is. Telling girls who like them to f off

Vinhell
VinhellLv4Vinhell

ur 3rd point he make decisions to entertain his summoner sounds like a slave.is he fine with it or forced to? can u clarify it more ,just asking cuz it sound frustrating to read acc. to my preference

Drifting_Embers
Drifting_EmbersLv3Drifting_Embers

✋ Although I don't have any right to ask you change anything, you must have made the story as best as possible. BUT I want to ask, will he give that goddess (bit*h) a beating(I am seriously annoyed by her) *you don't have to answer if you don't want to, I am just asking*