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AinzO0alGown
AinzO0alGownLv143yr
2021-01-23 20:29

One star is all this deserves One star is all this deserves One star is all this deserves One star is all this deserves One star is all this deserves

Talent System In Naruto

ravenwings
4.5
46 Chs

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Lord_Rimuru
Lord_RimuruLv4

Then why tf did you give it five stars?

3yr
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AinzO0alGown
AinzO0alGownLv14

Pfft are you blind I said 'one star is all this deserves' 5 times. Don't you know math?

Lord_Rimuru:Then why tf did you give it five stars?
3yr
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Arekuruu_Tento
Arekuruu_TentoLv12

Wow smart

AinzO0alGown:Pfft are you blind I said 'one star is all this deserves' 5 times. Don't you know math?
3yr
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Lord_Rimuru
Lord_RimuruLv4

...

AinzO0alGown:Pfft are you blind I said 'one star is all this deserves' 5 times. Don't you know math?
3yr
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Lord_Rimuru
Lord_RimuruLv4

usually people do the same thing (so they get a certain amount of letters into the review) and then rate it one star...

Lord_Rimuru:...
3yr
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DoctorLin
DoctorLinLv6

The miserable is a genius

Arekuruu_Tento:Wow smart
3yr
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akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

grammar is too bad making it difficult to read otherwise story seems good as of third chapter but sadly Im not willing to read more because of grammar

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Lliono
LlionoLv4

Good idea and nice nice start. The grammar, though, is terrible and I just can't read it. I takes courage to try and post though and I commend you for that. Try finding someone to help with your grammar.

3yr
Ezzaldien_s
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denhaanxander
denhaanxanderLv12

Interesting summary and idea which has a lot of potentiol however the grammer is awfull and doesnt make any sense words words wordS 140 charecters

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GodlySamurai
GodlySamuraiLv4

Really good so far, love the few changes that you are making comparing to the original story. If you keep this pace(1 chapter per day or so) this will be an interesting read.

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HotWetDream
HotWetDreamLv14

i like this novel idea, thou still in beginning stage. dont disappoint us! dont drop pls ty[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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crackedskull
crackedskullLv4

Really fresh idea for me upgrading and changing the power of original characters good story writing and character depth is little but its okay it just fan fic who gives shit good luck (English not my languages sorry if you have headache reading this )

3yr
R0B
R0BLv2

The story is messed up from the very beginning. Every major naruto character starts of the same age. I don't understand what the author was hoping for, but he dropped the novel and that speaks for itself.

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GustPigey
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