Review Detail of IcanshowUtheworld in The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

Could have been a decent story ruined by too much exposition. I find myself often skimming Through them. Not every detail and thought process should be spell out, it disrupts the story's flow. Context, subtext, and clues works fine if not better even! Readers need not be spoon-fed. Instead let them solve puzzles. let them work for their meal. dont look down on them.