Thank you for reading my book. It's my first novel, and I'm still learning, so I give four stars! Here's what you can expect: The Good The story flows well, and grammar and sentence issues are minimal. Otto, the MC, is smart, ruthless, pragmatic, rational, and powerful. He loves his schemes, but is NOT a genius, an edge lord, a simp, or omnipotent. Each floor could lead to an entirely new world! The worlds are unique, and feel real...this is not a copy cat novel hehe The Bad Pacing! It starts fast but slows down too much...something to work on No romance... POV shifts could be introduced and inserted better. There are moments where it may seem contrived...this is my first story so I'm working on this too All in all, I hope you can give it a chance.... I don't think you'll regret it!!!
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LIKEI think this is a very coOl story idea, i love tower climbing books. But i will have to agree its hard to read on the slow parts, I often find myself skipping paragraphs when people arent talking. and idea for the spell what if the higher circle spells are the advance element, for example fire is 1-3 circles and the lava is 4-6 and then idk something else for 7-10.
I would have read it longer but I once I checked how far the chapters went for I saw the last free one is called the end of the first floor which kinda bugged me cause I am someone who doesn't try to spend much on things that start to get the cost high quick and I realised that I probably would go through to the end cause of wanting to know what happens so I stopped myself pretty soon