Review Detail of Eclairs in HxH: God Of Choice System [Dropped]

I liked the idea of the novel, but am disappointed in how it is progressing. Mc constantly tries to fight and create enemy even when it could be avoided or he could control his greed, his body is said to be in early teens then he tries starting to picking up girls. Shows up his power in front of some of the most dangerous guys in the hxh world. And most of all, Author has changed the world which is not a butterfly effect just because he felt like it. I am not telling it is wrong, just it felt forced just for us to see his growth in power.