Alright story, not the best not the worst. I liked the idea behind the path choosing system however what rly destroys the story for me is the harem. The mc literally has no attraction to a girl but suddenly he gets an award from the system if he adds them to his harem and he then follows this to a t. Not only does he become a slave to the system, I am not gonna read a story about an mc going about collecting girls like they are dolls. Sorry, but I happen to like female characters and hate seeing them constantly used as dolls on a list. Like, do any authors have any sense? Like where tf is the personality? Its like they're empty shells just waiting for the mc to collect them... So disappointing tbh
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What tf he just started doing this and there are signs of a genuine liking he takes to the girl.
that's the reason I don't like harem actually, the same reason
The problem is that a good harem can only be written by a good experienced writer since it takes a lot of experience to give it a background and character development so that it is a credible harem within what fits for a fanfic or an original story without become forced, that is why experienced / professional authors recommend not to dabble in the harem genre until they feel capable unless they want to enter a spiral of future complications and more than anything hate from readers ... that's why they tend to Do things like the protagonist does not have a defined love interest and try to make moments happen that can develop future love interests, reaching a possible one-night stand like this, when they want the most understandable love interests that the woman likes the most. most readers can use them as an official pair oh in which case a well structured harem that has the necessary development to be able to keep the author compliant and keep the readers compliant
PD: Google Translate...
LucyAlterEgo:The problem is that a good harem can only be written by a good experienced writer since it takes a lot of experience to give it a background and character development so that it is a credible harem within what fits for a fanfic or an original story without become forced, that is why experienced / professional authors recommend not to dabble in the harem genre until they feel capable unless they want to enter a spiral of future complications and more than anything hate from readers ... that's why they tend to Do things like the protagonist does not have a defined love interest and try to make moments happen that can develop future love interests, reaching a possible one-night stand like this, when they want the most understandable love interests that the woman likes the most. most readers can use them as an official pair oh in which case a well structured harem that has the necessary development to be able to keep the author compliant and keep the readers compliant
It's not about harem... It's about the authors who doesn't know how to write a proper harem story.... They just think harem means collecting girls as Pokemons..
Charreos:that's the reason I don't like harem actually, the same reason
Now I understand why the translator washed his hands in the synopsis making it clear that he is not the author hahaha.
