Review Detail of Tbone_Steak93 in One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]
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At like chapter 100 saw the author say in one of the chapter's that people had been calling thus mediocre so I'mma keep it 💯. This story is honestly comparable to Endless Path: infinite cosmos for me with the detail the pacing so I get that fanfiction is wish fulfillment but this story honestly makes me wanna recommend people that wanna get into fanfiction .Might put pressure on the author writing this review but calling story mediocre sorry but your entitled to your opinion as anyone is but Mark my words this fanfiction will be one of the top 10 of one piece fanfiction . Seriously it is a bit slow-paced but honestly if yall like a face paced op Mc that is ridiculously talented and barely struggles I'mma keep it real this ain't for you . So to wrap it 5 stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 from me.
One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]
Vostarian
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Precheur:Thank you, now that i know you liked Endless Path : Infinite cosmos, i don't even need to read this story to know i won't like it.
I didn't even read this Infinite Cosmos, nor do I even care to try reading it. As far I am concerned the guy posted like some zombie 1000+ chapters making it feel like some wuxia story (still didn't read it). However, if you don't hate slow pacing or a Kingdom Building story, I don't see a reason to hate or not like my story without unfound reasons.
Precheur:Thank you, now that i know you liked Endless Path : Infinite cosmos, i don't even need to read this story to know i won't like it.
I don't know the story so I can't say much that "character development". Looked up a bit at how many chapters that guy has, and the good part of my story is that it will be smaller sized =))
Great_Young_Master:I've read that fanfic and the comments were "OMG, WHAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT." Just sad...
I stopped In the part he successful escaped the mine, so I told only about that part ( that part a little dark, for me at least :v ) and that " fled*) is to refer the part the mc escaped the mine after the battle… but I think fled is the wrong term... sorry
Vostarian:You are referring to my story?
You should still try Volume 2 because it's like you simply wasted your time reading the hard volume (you've built the muscles) but you can't enjoy the rest (is like you went to the gym building your muscles and couldn't flex them) I assure you, Volume 2 will be totally different compared to Vol 1 (because the way I built my story is to reveal bits of the world slowly and with Vol 1 being only the introduction to my kingdom setting and reveal other information, instead Vol 2 is a smoother transition to all that hard to digest information.)
MagikarpBombado:I stopped In the part he successful escaped the mine, so I told only about that part ( that part a little dark, for me at least :v ) and that " fled*) is to refer the part the mc escaped the mine after the battle… but I think fled is the wrong term... sorry
Vostarian:You should still try Volume 2 because it's like you simply wasted your time reading the hard volume (you've built the muscles) but you can't enjoy the rest (is like you went to the gym building your muscles and couldn't flex them) I assure you, Volume 2 will be totally different compared to Vol 1 (because the way I built my story is to reveal bits of the world slowly and with Vol 1 being only the introduction to my kingdom setting and reveal other information, instead Vol 2 is a smoother transition to all that hard to digest information.)
MagikarpBombado:ok, it's still in my reading list :v so let's go, and have a good day there :)