Review Detail of JunRaya in One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]
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Dunno if I wrote a Review on this FF yet but ill do it now just in case. (This wont be a good review btw). Best thing to tell you guys is READ Synopsis, This FF Is unique in its way of using One piece. Don't expect Author dropping his Mc into canon or anything of that sorts.Instead everything is going to be developed, I mean the world and the characters so It might turn down a few people but if you want a good FF then Read It, I highly recommend it. Writing Quality is 5/5, Hard to find anything wrong on how author writes this FF. Story Development and World building is A very Big thing on this FF, instead of placing a MC in A Animie/Manga, the author builds upon The story and lore of One Piece. Also the author makes the world itself feel real with the characters and the world around it. Character development is Awesome and you can really see this bc of how well he developed his own characters instead of using Canon. Mc and those around him are well developed and we havent even met the original Mc's yet. The updates are great and im not complaining bc it isnt few and he isnt on Hiatus! So Overall Its a great FF if you are looking for a Good and well develop FF. (Just hoping it wont be dropped anytime soon)
One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]
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Thanks for the bad review ;) Don't worry, we are sitting at the end of Volume 2 since the end of the Aztec mini-arc. Volume 3 and Volume 4 are planned out(main ideas - where I just have to sew those ideas into a shape), so you'll not get bored with me. Maybe my release schedule might change around on different days and times, but so far I don't have writer's blocks(everything original so far for 110 chapters I really would want to see what OP fanfic has this). The story I built has already a stable foundation. Just like a Painter who gave his paint the outline and only has to put the colors on it, I also did the same, giving the reader the general direction(outline) I want to take my story with the only problem for putting the colors on the draw.
But don't drop it, I know views on your fic is not much when we compare it other novels with almost same number of chapters on this site. But remember I will always read your fic if I have time.
Vostarian:Thanks for the bad review ;) Don't worry, we are sitting at the end of Volume 2 since the end of the Aztec mini-arc. Volume 3 and Volume 4 are planned out(main ideas - where I just have to sew those ideas into a shape), so you'll not get bored with me. Maybe my release schedule might change around on different days and times, but so far I don't have writer's blocks(everything original so far for 110 chapters I really would want to see what OP fanfic has this). The story I built has already a stable foundation. Just like a Painter who gave his paint the outline and only has to put the colors on it, I also did the same, giving the reader the general direction(outline) I want to take my story with the only problem for putting the colors on the draw.
well most people don't like slow pacd fanfic, thats prolly why it doesn't have many readers compare to the other
sword_demon:But don't drop it, I know views on your fic is not much when we compare it other novels with almost same number of chapters on this site. But remember I will always read your fic if I have time.
author do you think i can just skip the story where he already escape? without having issues? cuz dunno it's very boring really for me to keep reading him being a slave and all i mean the story is nice it's just slow don't take it seriously and drop the ff
Vostarian:Thanks for the bad review ;) Don't worry, we are sitting at the end of Volume 2 since the end of the Aztec mini-arc. Volume 3 and Volume 4 are planned out(main ideas - where I just have to sew those ideas into a shape), so you'll not get bored with me. Maybe my release schedule might change around on different days and times, but so far I don't have writer's blocks(everything original so far for 110 chapters I really would want to see what OP fanfic has this). The story I built has already a stable foundation. Just like a Painter who gave his paint the outline and only has to put the colors on it, I also did the same, giving the reader the general direction(outline) I want to take my story with the only problem for putting the colors on the draw.
Yea, there's no problem, you can do directly to Vol 2. However my advice read the last 2 chapters of Vol 1 so you can understand the circumstances Vol 2 stars. Other than that, in my first auxiliary chapter I made a small summary of Vol 1 should read it faster if you didn't like Vol 1 that much.
KING_IN_YELLOW:author do you think i can just skip the story where he already escape? without having issues? cuz dunno it's very boring really for me to keep reading him being a slave and all i mean the story is nice it's just slow don't take it seriously and drop the ff