Review Detail of Jasonenrick in One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]
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Well, I am honestly too lazy to say what is good and whatnot. The problems I have with the Story were already mentioned by others, so I won't be able to help the author with that aspect. A Meh Meh Story in my opinion, but opinions differ, so there's that. I had a bit more expectations when I first saw that Story, so I got a little disappointed when I read it....;( I read the first 6 Chapters because I thought it was good to know the character's personalities even though I know nearly everything there is to know about Vlad the Impaler and his Story. But when it got past that and into the World of One Piece, pure disappointment so far. The Chapters are longer then most on this Platform, so I have to spent some time to read them, but it is not worth it in my opinion because I lost the interest in the Novel really fast. (An: I don't prove read what I write and English isn't my mother language, so expect missing words or grammatically wrong sentences, or smth likes this)
One Piece: Blood Unleashed [Revamped - in the synopsis]
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That's just lazy reviewing At the end of the day some like fast-paced novels that end in bad taste, other readers like to take it slow, too see the plot being build up and from the start, your review gives me a salty taste in my mouth. Pure disappointment? You don't like to see people creativity? Probably you're a binge reader of those system novels or those with a crap plot to Tell me what's so boring? The fact that I actually take my time to build up my characters? Set up future events? Have you reached even the latest chapter? "Meh, meh" Well, there a start in all things I guess. So I'll also this comment above what I think about the reviewer. Someone who expects from the start, a gun-blazing shitshow of One Piece fanfic, with a psychotic MC that only knows to kill. But got upset that he didn't find exactly that, instead found the MC stuck inside the body of a child, in a world that he has no information about right at the starting point that pirates pillage the entire village and takes the MC into slavery. That's the meh, meh story. A protagonist that actually has to grit his teeth to even see the next day and train his entire life to reach greatness and not someone with omniscient memories of events or some batshit system to power him up.
Oh, chill dude, what got you so worked up? I still gave you a 3.5 Stars Review, which is good in my opinion, but whatever... I also said that opinions differ and that some maybe like it but I am not one of those, so chill and accept that I am not that into your Story, okay? Also, yeah, it's a lazy review but I doubt you get so worked up if someone just gives u a review like that: " I love it, keep up the good work. Finally, someone who can write a good One Piece Fanfic" 99% of the reviews aren't good reviews and just one or two sentences. Also, as I stated, people already told you why they don't like your Story or what you did wrong, so why should I repeat it?
Vostarian:That's just lazy reviewing At the end of the day some like fast-paced novels that end in bad taste, other readers like to take it slow, too see the plot being build up and from the start, your review gives me a salty taste in my mouth. Pure disappointment? You don't like to see people creativity? Probably you're a binge reader of those system novels or those with a crap plot to Tell me what's so boring? The fact that I actually take my time to build up my characters? Set up future events? Have you reached even the latest chapter? "Meh, meh" Well, there a start in all things I guess. So I'll also this comment above what I think about the reviewer. Someone who expects from the start, a gun-blazing shitshow of One Piece fanfic, with a psychotic MC that only knows to kill. But got upset that he didn't find exactly that, instead found the MC stuck inside the body of a child, in a world that he has no information about right at the starting point that pirates pillage the entire village and takes the MC into slavery. That's the meh, meh story. A protagonist that actually has to grit his teeth to even see the next day and train his entire life to reach greatness and not someone with omniscient memories of events or some batshit system to power him up.
there is even a Review with the content " Nice"....you didn't see wrong, that's the whole review......so don't tell me that I am lazy
Vostarian:That's just lazy reviewing At the end of the day some like fast-paced novels that end in bad taste, other readers like to take it slow, too see the plot being build up and from the start, your review gives me a salty taste in my mouth. Pure disappointment? You don't like to see people creativity? Probably you're a binge reader of those system novels or those with a crap plot to Tell me what's so boring? The fact that I actually take my time to build up my characters? Set up future events? Have you reached even the latest chapter? "Meh, meh" Well, there a start in all things I guess. So I'll also this comment above what I think about the reviewer. Someone who expects from the start, a gun-blazing shitshow of One Piece fanfic, with a psychotic MC that only knows to kill. But got upset that he didn't find exactly that, instead found the MC stuck inside the body of a child, in a world that he has no information about right at the starting point that pirates pillage the entire village and takes the MC into slavery. That's the meh, meh story. A protagonist that actually has to grit his teeth to even see the next day and train his entire life to reach greatness and not someone with omniscient memories of events or some batshit system to power him up.
Kek do I sound like I'm that angry? Nah fam, just sarcastic cause I got covid. So by your standards, even if their opposite to mine, you did my story a 50/50 grade. (I'll be sarcastic asf here) I'll go rush to the stars so happy I'm to hear the same (the story is long and boring) Not your taste, come back after I have more chapters. Because my One Piece fanfic just started by hmmm, normal fanfic standards =)) Damn, and to think that I'm so close to revealing what devil fruit MC eats. That's a One Piece part right? Right, there were even some that commented where is the One Piece elements. Anyway, don't be upset on me that I picked a bit of a fight. I appreciate your views and review, even after, saying that "meh, meh story" which rubbed some salt to me.
Jasonenrick:Oh, chill dude, what got you so worked up? I still gave you a 3.5 Stars Review, which is good in my opinion, but whatever... I also said that opinions differ and that some maybe like it but I am not one of those, so chill and accept that I am not that into your Story, okay? Also, yeah, it's a lazy review but I doubt you get so worked up if someone just gives u a review like that: " I love it, keep up the good work. Finally, someone who can write a good One Piece Fanfic" 99% of the reviews aren't good reviews and just one or two sentences. Also, as I stated, people already told you why they don't like your Story or what you did wrong, so why should I repeat it?
I'll make a meme for that guy =)). Right, but usually, I don't delete reviews. What comes, comes. I'll just have some argue for the sake of it, so I can understand what upset them and just move on. You like my story or not, I almost pass the 30 chapter mark and go forward without many breaks. It will not change much some formulated opinions on the outcome of the story. Maybe I will go in another gear, which I did by the time the MC eats his devil fruit. The other arc is made in a more fast-paced manner for all tastes. (which means I heard those comments and views and switched a bit the style of storytelling.
Jasonenrick:there is even a Review with the content " Nice"....you didn't see wrong, that's the whole review......so don't tell me that I am lazyimage
Well, I might come back when the other arc is there to see if it fits my taste, so until then, bye. Also, sorry to hear that you got covid, I wish you all the best that nothing bad happens!
Vostarian:I'll make a meme for that guy =)). Right, but usually, I don't delete reviews. What comes, comes. I'll just have some argue for the sake of it, so I can understand what upset them and just move on. You like my story or not, I almost pass the 30 chapter mark and go forward without many breaks. It will not change much some formulated opinions on the outcome of the story. Maybe I will go in another gear, which I did by the time the MC eats his devil fruit. The other arc is made in a more fast-paced manner for all tastes. (which means I heard those comments and views and switched a bit the style of storytelling.
Ok, so I come with a notification. I don't know if you still kept on checking my novel. But the first arc just finished. Maybe with an entire arc you can tell with a more accurate guess if my novel is your taste or not.
Jasonenrick:Well, I might come back when the other arc is there to see if it fits my taste, so until then, bye. Also, sorry to hear that you got covid, I wish you all the best that nothing bad happens!
Vostarian:Ok, so I come with a notification. I don't know if you still kept on checking my novel. But the first arc just finished. Maybe with an entire arc you can tell with a more accurate guess if my novel is your taste or not.
Ahem, wanted to ask is this review still worths staying? Because from my perspective since the moment I reworked the story, those ancient reviews doesn't tell the reader exactly what to expect. The story now is totally something else from where you stopped. Waiting for your response to see what we're going to do with this review of yours. As you can see, even 1 review can make my score down because I don't have spammers to give me 5* all day long. I'm not that shameless, even my review is more of a guide for future readers. Also, in case the apocalypse of 5* reviews spam pops up, I would delete those reviews spams, because it's spam, it doesn't tell the reader anything.
Jasonenrick:I'll look into it ;) thx for the notification ;)👌👍
Nah, I am deleting it and write a new Review soon, don't know when, but I will; I hope so al least.....🥴 My memory is kinda blurry sometimes and I easily forget things.....
Vostarian:Ahem, wanted to ask is this review still worths staying? Because from my perspective since the moment I reworked the story, those ancient reviews doesn't tell the reader exactly what to expect. The story now is totally something else from where you stopped. Waiting for your response to see what we're going to do with this review of yours. As you can see, even 1 review can make my score down because I don't have spammers to give me 5* all day long. I'm not that shameless, even my review is more of a guide for future readers. Also, in case the apocalypse of 5* reviews spam pops up, I would delete those reviews spams, because it's spam, it doesn't tell the reader anything.