Dunno if I wrote a Review on this FF yet but ill do it now just in case. (This wont be a good review btw). Best thing to tell you guys is READ Synopsis, This FF Is unique in its way of using One piece. Don't expect Author dropping his Mc into canon or anything of that sorts.Instead everything is going to be developed, I mean the world and the characters so It might turn down a few people but if you want a good FF then Read It, I highly recommend it. Writing Quality is 5/5, Hard to find anything wrong on how author writes this FF. Story Development and World building is A very Big thing on this FF, instead of placing a MC in A Animie/Manga, the author builds upon The story and lore of One Piece. Also the author makes the world itself feel real with the characters and the world around it. Character development is Awesome and you can really see this bc of how well he developed his own characters instead of using Canon. Mc and those around him are well developed and we havent even met the original Mc's yet. The updates are great and im not complaining bc it isnt few and he isnt on Hiatus! So Overall Its a great FF if you are looking for a Good and well develop FF. (Just hoping it wont be dropped anytime soon)

I actually prefer adventures more than kingdom building but this story definitely deserves place in the top. I can feel the author's hard work in writing this, just the details in the story really hooks me like roaming pudge looking for victim. In the early chapter's, It would be hard to think of it as a fanfic because everything sounds original although it is derived from other stories. I'm at chapter 100+ and there's no sign of canon events which is commendable because the author has to think of his own scenarios and obstacles the mc has to face. It's really unique fanfic, most I've read has OP mc who achieves his goal without much problem and becomes godlike which is definitely entertaining but not realistic while this is slow story and the mc is not so strong but has lot of potential to be unlocked. The characters also acts like real person except for retards. This story definitely has lot of potential and it is a precious diamond, I'm glad I found it. Now all I can say is.....

Pfff, this is a solid beginning. This is what you call character development. You're really hyping me up for this story. This is a really unique approach to OP. Hope you don't suddenly go on a hiatus or drop this. As an author, I approve of the beginning of this story. Oh and if someone who is reading this, is looking for a better OP story, you can read mine called, One Piece: Finally Free. I'm sorry Morpheus, but I had to shout myself out really quickly. Hope you don't mind😁✌️

really great fanfic. it was a little slowe at the beginning but this helped to build up MC so it's a plus in my book. also I found this art with all three love interests (let's pretend that girl on the right has white hair)

What is the point of being fanfic? Why don't you make it an original one? If there is no character that we know of so what is the point? Reader tends to be excited when they know something about your fanfic if not, make your original story and don't based it to an anime just to be hyped.

Honestly the story is too slow paced. The MC is a bit bland for my taste. I am a fan of dracula, heck even my main hero in MLBB is Alucard with the Dracula skin. It's just that it's missing something, something that would get readers hooked. I don't know the right words, but it's definitely missing something.

The beginning is a bit slow but well written in my opinion. I cannot say anything yet about the construction of the world or the development of story as it is still early but I hope it follows a logical and intelligent path. Grammar is good especially for webnovel fanfics. As for Vlad... I don't know what to say but I like it; However I have a question for the devil fruit, will it be one already seen or will it be "invented" by you?

A truly great fanfic, Vol 1 will make you drop several times but if you remain patient and read it till the end, you can easily tell that its worth your time. And vol 2 is much better. This story is litle bit different from usual one piece fanfic where a person is born get power and set sail. No its little bit different with proper history of a character, then a litlle kingdom building. and its side characters are just perfect not shallow or robots like other fics. All I can say is its best one piece fanfiic and you should read it.

Writing Quality- I haven't seen triggering mistakes or obvious ones. Stability of Updates- So far stable. (Chapters 1-17) Story Development- A bit slow so I gotta give you a 4. Other than that it seems very good. Character Design- Vlad The Impaler is not as brash as you make him. He would have not made that request about food. He would have realized the merchant is greedy and flattered him to get a easy job. and slowly rise up the ranks and kill the merchant. Other than that good job. World Background- One piece with one of the (previous) strongest vampire's. Overall I think this fan-fiction has a lot of potential and I hope you keep up the good work. So you get a 4.6