Review Detail of Da_TuTuR in God´s Eyes

Tl;dr : overall i like it. The beginning is good but too long. Some part in the middle are not well done and boring but other part are near perfect. The universe is well built but some part are inconsistant or missing imo (partly for futur project ?), the end is completly rushed. The author is really good for writing some "sad part" of his story but more "epic situation" are needed. Teasing for futur event is too much (like "this decision may change the rest of all living being") and i think the author forgot some. Author need to better think on the balance of the story, and write the storyboard at the beginning. (Spoiler : "adopted baby", Ark with the monarch "ok good luck, we leave, bb", the end complelty rushed. You can't do that man) BUT for a first novel it's a really good start with lot of thing to improve.