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TaintedMetal
TaintedMetalLv24yr
2021-04-12 10:44

Overall it's a good slow paced novel with equally good intentions: to ensure that you get a clear picture of the characters and the situations they go through. I'd recommend this novel for people who want to take a break from the action packed stories that immediately throw you into the action (sometimes, a bit too fast). As this is a slow paced reading experience, you must be patient as you go through. The author does a good job at allowing the reader to go through each chapter with smooth transitions in between scenes. My only criticism are the telling and showing aspects, there are some characters that we get to know via telling (when the author gives the information immediately). Telling is fine, but in this case there is too much of it. Perhaps some things like atmosphere and characters can be shown to the reader: give the reader a chance to find out what are things like instead of being told about it directly. Other than that, everything else in the book is good.

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