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Mistaken_me
Mistaken_meLv132yr
2023-02-03 00:04

if you are an avid reader and have high standards for novels.... this is not your cup of tea... read first 10 chapters and you'll feel it... I read same author's other book(i.e. Ace of Terrans).. that have much better writing, character design, story progression, world background, and many more... and comparing this to that, this sucks... I don't know if this is written by same author.. maybe this is novel through which author improved himself.. it did came before AoT, and AoT is actively updated.... sorry I'll not continue with this novel.. hope my review do not get deleted.. author-sama keep critic reviews.. everyone grows and improves oneself... so please don't show false ratings ..

The Urban Dao Child.

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THE_WORDSMITH
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See, with all due respect. I am not asking people to read this forcefully, and neither am I a fan of deleting reviews. I can understand that this work of mine is not very good. I am open to criticism. However, if I delete the reviews, that is because some people just comment to slam things down, those comments are only stating that I am bad and they do it in a negative fashion. I am not a very tolerant person which is why I silently delete them. I apologize but some people point fingers and say that the ratings are faked without any basis.

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