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Kisara_Hiroto
Kisara_HirotoAuthor3yr
2021-11-20 20:02

Hey Guys, Author's Review here. This is a very good read, that much I would have said even if I was not the author here. So read it and give it a try. I give it 5/5 rating. Let's see...... Writing Quality: I am a newbie author, but even then I have a good grasp of Grammar so, don't expect Grammatically incorrect sentences, there can be sometimes a few typos of forgotten words but that's understandable I'm not a machine Story: Story is a slow pace at first which will evolve into normal pace around 15th chapter, 1st few chapters are basically slow to showcase the world. Character Design: Every character is important there won't be a single character who will speak like a bot and I have a lot of confidence to create good characters. Updates: Unless I have a real life crisis I will update according to what RR I have given. World background: A medival fantasy, with a lot of sci-fi elements, anything else would be a spoiler

Dance with the Nightingale

Kisara_Hiroto
4.5
129 Chs

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Chaosking
ChaoskingLv4

Um.....is this harem😗?

3yr
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Chaosking
ChaoskingLv4

Also, I have to say that I really like your novel, the words and story are very interesting, I truly hope you will continue this masterpiece👍

3yr
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Kisara_Hiroto
Kisara_HirotoAuthor

Well, so as to not cause conflict between harem and non-harem factions, I'd rather not say

Chaosking:Um.....is this harem😗?
3yr
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Chaosking
ChaoskingLv4

Oh~~~well won't it be revealed one day~~maybe a hint🤐 Personally I like harem but no matger what you chose I will continue this😁

Kisara_Hiroto:Well, so as to not cause conflict between harem and non-harem factions, I'd rather not say
3yr
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Kisara_Hiroto
Kisara_HirotoAuthor

Hehehee~ Not telling 😸

Chaosking:Oh~~~well won't it be revealed one day~~maybe a hint🤐 Personally I like harem but no matger what you chose I will continue this😁
3yr
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Chaosking
ChaoskingLv4

😌😔🥺

Kisara_Hiroto:Hehehee~ Not telling 😸
3yr
5
MILARCH
MILARCHLv13

ugh, i hope not.

Kisara_Hiroto:Well, so as to not cause conflict between harem and non-harem factions, I'd rather not say
3yr
5
ThisNovelSucksBro
ThisNovelSucksBroLv3

How ironic

MILARCH:ugh, i hope not.
3yr
4
DefinitelyNotACat
DefinitelyNotACatLv4

can someone tell me if there will be harem? i dont want to read something to something just for it to be ruined by the idiocy that is harem

ThisNovelSucksBro:How ironic
3yr
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Potatowned
PotatownedLv14

This is no different than saying it's a harem for me. Guess I'll put this on the back burner until someone confirms something. Nothing worse than reading 100+ chapters of something only for it to become a harem and then I have to drop it.

Kisara_Hiroto:Well, so as to not cause conflict between harem and non-harem factions, I'd rather not say
3yr
9
Kisara_Hiroto
Kisara_HirotoAuthor

Actually, without even me saying this you can pretty much get the idea by reading the chapters till now...

Potatowned:This is no different than saying it's a harem for me. Guess I'll put this on the back burner until someone confirms something. Nothing worse than reading 100+ chapters of something only for it to become a harem and then I have to drop it.
3yr
1
Kisara_Hiroto
Kisara_HirotoAuthor

Btw, there was a reason I never added a harem tag🤫

Potatowned:This is no different than saying it's a harem for me. Guess I'll put this on the back burner until someone confirms something. Nothing worse than reading 100+ chapters of something only for it to become a harem and then I have to drop it.
3yr
4
Noice_Toit_Smort
Noice_Toit_SmortLv14

I want more chapters please 😭

3yr
1
Kisara_Hiroto
Kisara_HirotoAuthor

Writing one...

Noice_Toit_Smort:I want more chapters please 😭
3yr
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Lokoso_Traya
Lokoso_TrayaLv3

Only 1 girl end up as his lover right?

Kisara_Hiroto:Btw, there was a reason I never added a harem tag🤫
2yr
2
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

i want 1 chapter daily

Kisara_Hiroto:Writing one...
2yr
1
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

is this dropped

Kisara_Hiroto:Writing one...
2yr
1
Kisara_Hiroto
Kisara_HirotoAuthor

Nope

Ashborn1609:is this dropped
2yr
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

do you plan to update 1ch/week or will you go back to 1ch/month

Kisara_Hiroto:Nope
2yr
Kisara_Hiroto
Kisara_HirotoAuthor

Three chaps per week

Ashborn1609:do you plan to update 1ch/week or will you go back to 1ch/month
2yr
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