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2021-02-03 11:55

It's a thoroughly enjoyable novel so far, set in the time of Douluo Dalu 1 but with numerous aspects from Douluo Dalu 2 present, such as evil spirit masters, spiritual seas, soul guidance devices and spirit beasts over 200,000 years old capable of taking human form despite still being spirit beasts. I sincerely hope the novel continues to be updated as this author is rather known for dropping novels after a few chapters sadly. My breakdown is: Writing Quality: 5. Update Stability: 3 Story Development: 5 Character Design: 5 World Background: 5 (DD1 world background was a masterpiece in and of itself, adding DD2 elements brings it up a notch when done right, the novel is still in early days but I do not see any issues thus far.)

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