Review Detail of sayeftyfirst in The Magical Blacksmith

Honestly, the story is pretty funny but the rest of the story is mediocre at best. The characters are flat and uninteresting. The author does a poor job of developing the world and the pacing is all over the place. It is one of those system novels that leans on the system to do all of the work of carrying the novel because the author is incapable of writing compelling characters or creating conflict that is anything other than hamfisted nonsense.