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R_u_mad_bro
R_u_mad_broLv43yr
2021-04-01 20:27

first 4 chapters are fine but 5th chapter has things that I am not a fan of ... like putting religious promotions in the story . I came to read a novel not a religious doctrine , don't want to sink into that swamp . will come back to read more later. maybe its not as bad as I think it is....

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Domn
DomnLv13

What do u mean exactly?

R_u_mad_bro
R_u_mad_broLv4

5th chapter has some taoism heavy content don't forget the mc is a priest . so I can guess the story will have a religious side to it (which I don't like in stories and novels) a novel needs to have the intent of making an engaging story not describing/compering religions.

Domn:What do u mean exactly?
R_u_mad_bro
R_u_mad_broLv4

because mc is a priest religious content will probably continue all of the story , this is not a side arc that will be gone after 5-10 chapters, it will effect the story and mc decisions.

R_u_mad_bro:5th chapter has some taoism heavy content don't forget the mc is a priest . so I can guess the story will have a religious side to it (which I don't like in stories and novels) a novel needs to have the intent of making an engaging story not describing/compering religions.
R_a_v_an
R_a_v_anLv13

Actually, there is only a line where they say that Taoism is only good religion. But, apart from that, there isn't much about religion.

R_u_mad_bro
R_u_mad_broLv4

there was 1 chapter there is a very high chance there will be a 2nd or 3rd in the future.

R_a_v_an:Actually, there is only a line where they say that Taoism is only good religion. But, apart from that, there isn't much about religion.
Schrodinger_s_cat
Schrodinger_s_catLv11

actually I think it'sinteresting because instead of saying that taoΓ―sm is good, he explains its doctrine, its philosophy. That gives the novel a depth that light novels usually don't have, and I find it refreshing to read something that's not merely on the "you killed my family, I will kill your family too" level. Furthermore, the MC can use his doctrine to explain his actions, so that they seem logical, unlike most novels.

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Verlion
VerlionLv10

This novel surprised me greatly. I'm not sure what I expected going into this story, but I wasn't expecting to enjoy it so much. This was an incredibly relaxing story to read. Usually when I get sucked into a story it's because it's exciting or I'm intrigued to know more, but the best way I can think of to describe this story was I was comfortably snuggled up in bed and didn't want to get up. Characters - We'll start with the MC. Probably what makes you feel relaxed the most. He's a very peaceful and spiritual person, very knowledgeable, and handles life in a smooth manner as is fitting of his raising. He follows his heart and just his way of handling life is something that I really wish I had in my life. The side characters are significantly better than you'd expect from a livestream audience. While only a few of them have been named or interacted with, there is still subtle details and character hidden in the interactions. I'm hoping some of these characters stick around long term to watch the MC's rise. World - World building is a bit slack here, but it's not something to dock the story on. It's a modern day world, probably Earth, and that's about it. This isn't really a story that so far has needed extensive world building and background though, and what is needed exists. Style - This is where the story shines for me. The relaxed feel, the smooth information and knowledge dumps, the details about nature and the world around the MC. All of it just combines to make this story really stand out to me. Overall - I'm off to find and read the MTL after posting this. Hopefully it's not too bad, because I really want to just keep reading. I haven't felt this good after reading something in a long time. No excitement or heart racing, just want to keep staying in this comfy bed a little longer.

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