Review Detail of Dayside in Ancient Vampire in a Modern World

Item: Ancient Vampire in a Modern World
Rating: 1.6

Review detail

DaysideLv123yrDayside

God awful writing quality. The story itself is pretty much written by a child. The author is tunneling the story and not really expanding on the world too much. There are tons of mistakes that are so easy to spot that it makes reading it hard.

Ancient Vampire in a Modern World

TheUnknownEntity

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Replies7

Kazu_maLv3Kazu_ma

You think author doesn't know that? well most do but some don't. In this case, I don't know (lol) but I pretty sure the author will try to improve the writing in the future. For now, it's just the beginning of the story.

3yr

Venerable_LinfengLv11Venerable_Linfeng

Idk too man, but if the author is really just a child, then I ain’t going to expect anything much.

3yr

Ujju_HellLv2Ujju_Hell

aren't you the author?

Venerable_Linfeng:Idk too man, but if the author is really just a child, then I ain’t going to expect anything much.

3yr

Venerable_LinfengLv11Venerable_Linfeng

Haha, yeah I’m an author but not this book’s author.

Ujju_Hell:aren't you the author?

3yr

Venerable_LinfengLv11Venerable_Linfeng

Well, then I’ll expect something from you.

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3yr

TheUnknownEntityAuthorTheUnknownEntity

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2yr

Wondering_ReaderLv3Wondering_Reader

Ah i like your novels

Venerable_Linfeng:Idk too man, but if the author is really just a child, then I ain’t going to expect anything much.

2yr