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Venerable_Linfeng

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My pen-name is Venerable Linfeng. I write random genres novels. Fav Genres:Martial Arts, Action, Magic, Game,WuXia, Fan-Fiction, Xianxia, System etc

2018-12-20 JoinedAscension Island
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng13d
    Replied to TheDolphin

    I think it’s the system that can track everything, not the mc himself haha.

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    I Can Track Everything
    Eastern Fantasy · Sanmao Wu
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng26d
    Replied to Venerable_Linfeng

    If anyone can read the raw version, you’ll find out that it’s completely different from the translation.

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    Unparalleled After Ten Consecutive Draws
    Eastern Fantasy · Carefree Smile
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng26d
    Replied to Venerable_Linfeng

    Wait a min, shouldn’t the protagonist’s name be Ye Feng? How come his name is Chu Kuangren instead? Sounds so ugly and unusual.

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    Unparalleled After Ten Consecutive Draws
    Eastern Fantasy · Carefree Smile
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng1mth
    Posted

    All right, your fellow writer here! This is the second review and serious review. Here are the reasons why I gave this book 3 stars: 1. Writing Quality: Everything in here is indeed readable and understandable, but it is not in the right way. Since you use 3rd person narration as your writing style, make sure that everything is in the past tense. It’s true that everything is readable, but some readers still prefer or pursue the perfect writing style where grammars are fit to read instead. If you have time, be sure to edit them seriously. Punctuation, glaringly wrong grammar, typos, unusual phrase, etc,. 2. Updating Stability: In this period of time, the schedule is 0ch/week, but I gave 3 stars hoping the author will be able to change it and make it stable in the future. 3. Story Development: The pacing is not stable at all! Don’t move from one scene to another too quickly or too slowly. If things have to be skipped, be sure to express it down, don’t write a random and unnecessary scene. Don’t end a scene unclearly. Don’t add info dump.(eg. don’t introduce unnecessary characters) But note that info dump is still necessary, just don’t add too much in one chapter. 4. Character Design: If you have your own unique protagonist, that would be the best. I’ve seen too much typical protagonists nowadays now. Also, introduce your MC a bit more clearly, because it’s hard to distinguish who is your MC if one only reads roughly instead of thoroughly. I gave 2 stars because I saw quite a bunch of typical characters in here. 5. World Background: If your story is Western-Fantasy based, don’t mix in the “Sensei” or similar Japanese stuff, only use the Westerners’ words. I gave 3 stars because it’s a fantasy world, a world where it’s big enough that anything can happen and exist. That’s all for my rough review which can be counted as initial step for improvements for your book. ✌️✌️✌️

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    The Lone Girl
    Fantasy Romance · KASHYP
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng1mth
    Replied to Eonia

    Hehe, you’ll find out the reason later 🥰🥰

    Ch 28 The Mo Family is in Danger
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    Supreme Demon God
    Eastern Fantasy · Venerable_Linfeng
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng1mth
    Replied to fswmoq80

    Stop doing your scamming sh*t, really tired of seeing your professional scamming invitation now.

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    Trapped On A Death World
    Video Games · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng1mth
    Replied to Rintran_Tran

    No harem [img=coins][img=coins]😆😆

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    90,000 Years of Longevity
    Martial Arts · Venerable_Linfeng
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng1mth
    This book has been deleted.
  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng2mth
    Replied to SirZed

    Thank you for your reminder and sorry for that, it was actually an idiom. It means, he already has a few enemies blocking him, so what if another troublemaker comes? He still did not them in his eyes the slightest bit. But since I was lazy to explain, I edited this dialogue to a simpler term now.

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    Supreme Demon God
    Eastern Fantasy · Venerable_Linfeng
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng2mth
    Posted

    Ahem, this is author's traditional and sacred habit of reviewing my own book. I don't really have much to say here. This novel is a bit cliche initially, and each chapter might be a bit long(prob around 1500-2000 words), but further down, I will try my best to live up to your expectation. The MC is a bit cold since he was originally a demon or still-to-be a demon in his second life, but he is not that cold-blooded/ruthless nor loves to kill. I hope that this story will give you some unexpected twist of plot at some points. Don't read this anymore, just go to read the main thing now!!!!

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    Supreme Demon God
    Eastern Fantasy · Venerable_Linfeng
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng2mth
    This book has been deleted.
  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng2mth
    Replied to Devilcrawl

    御兽诸天

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    Reigning Supreme With Pets
    Eastern Fantasy · Xiao Jiu
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng2mth
    Commented

    This story is seriously good af, can’t wait for more chaps

    Ch 3 I cut my middle finger with a bread knife
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    Assian Meme Thief
    Fantasy · XXgilgameshXX
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng2mth
    Commented

    Good story fffffffffff

    Ch 2 Australia doesn’t exist
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    Fantasy · XXgilgameshXX
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng2mth
    Commented

    Good story

    Ch 1 I just want the author badge
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    Assian Meme Thief
    Fantasy · XXgilgameshXX
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng2mth
    Replied to holson_Charles

    You can find the raw name at the end of this page

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    Reigning Supreme With Pets
    Eastern Fantasy · Xiao Jiu
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng2mth
    Replied to BloodNobless

    Thank you for your support :3

    Ch 114 Unparalleled
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    90,000 Years of Longevity
    Martial Arts · Venerable_Linfeng
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng3mth
    Replied to Khin_Hnin_6371

    Tell me yours, I will contact u when I have time 😉👌

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    90,000 Years of Longevity
    Martial Arts · Venerable_Linfeng
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng3mth
    Posted

    I kept the (shameless) tradition of rating author's own book a full 5 stars. This book will be updated daily after it becomes stable, I hope our fellow "book-friends" and my readers from the previous books like this new novel which has a completely new taste. Constructive criticisms/reviews are welcomed with both hands, while unreasonable and abusive reviews will be deleted.

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    Rebirth of Infinite Myth
    Fantasy · Venerable_Linfeng
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  • Venerable_Linfeng
    Venerable_Linfeng3mth
    Replied to Traps_Are_Gay

    Thank you 😃

    Ch 16 Heavy Snow
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    90,000 Years of Longevity
    Martial Arts · Venerable_Linfeng
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