Review Detail of Nimos_Analiak in A Fox in Twilight

Thanks I'm spending more time trying to fix mistakes and someone went through and commented corrections on my earlier chapters so I fixed a lot of them. My only issue is getting focused in the short time I have available to write. But I try to update every Monday at the latest

That's fine, take your time writing. I think as long as you update people will be happy even if it's a late update. It's very good

Alice overused ain't gonna lie

Lol for good reason cute girlfriend that can see the future and help you get the best ending … 0.o is there a better pairing in this world

probably not but I'm kinda getting bored of Alice stories as they start nearly the same or worse...

Fair fair variety is the spice of life