Review Detail of Bloo_02 in Mafia Baby

I absolutely love your entire plot line😍❤.... I think the story is great, the leads are brilliant, the panning out of chapters is nice.👍 But I have issues with the your writing style. I like that your sentences don't have all the drama and excessive length, and are instead neat and brief.... But you really have to proof-read your work again cause at times your sentences come off as abrupt and hasty. Biggest point, make sure you spell the Lead protagonist name correctly; do spell checks, pronoun placement checks, re-punctuation of phrases as well as tenses. Biggest shock was seeing a beautiful book not being voted for ....Author I think youyour work is amazing ❤😍😘🔥🤩🤤 I hoe this book truly gets all the exposure it deserves 👍