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I really am surprised by this book, it's surprising and thrilling but at the same time has its beautiful mmoments... But this book does need a lot of work as far as a spell check, tenses as well as pronouns are concerned. Otherwise, this is a brilliant peice of work ... Well done to the author ๐๐ฅ๐คฉ๐๐โค
I absolutely love your entire plot line๐โค.... I think the story is great, the leads are brilliant, the panning out of chapters is nice.๐ But I have issues with the your writing style. I like that your sentences don't have all the drama and excessive length, and are instead neat and brief.... But you really have to proof-read your work again cause at times your sentences come off as abrupt and hasty. Biggest point, make sure you spell the Lead protagonist name correctly; do spell checks, pronoun placement checks, re-punctuation of phrases as well as tenses. Biggest shock was seeing a beautiful book not being voted for ....Author I think youyour work is amazing โค๐๐๐ฅ๐คฉ๐คค I hoe this book truly gets all the exposure it deserves ๐
A very well written book, love the characters energy and personalities. Definitely deserves a whole lot more votes... However all the given chapters do need another read through for spelling, grammar, tense and pronoun checks... But I really love the story development so far ... ๐๐คฉโค๐ Hats off to the wonderful writer ๐โค๐ฅ๐คค๐
Oh my gosh! Can I kiss this book?! ๐คค๐คญ๐คฉ๐ฅ๐โค๐ This was such a beautiful book.... I can't believe it's over ๐ญ๐ญ...I'm so glad that this book was short and sweet... Definitely couldn't have asked for a better read.... A huge I love your work to the author ๐โค... Just absolutely beautiful ๐๐ฅโค