Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in The Lawes Girl

Here are my honest thought based on what I read so far and sorry for the long time to review because of real life problem, World Background: The world building in this one is mostly okay in my opinion and I do like how the author describe the world which is quite detail and most of it fine. However, I think the author should give a clearer direction for the world itself to make it more interesting Characters: Lucile so far its okay and the other cast is also fine in my opinion. However, I do suggest the author to make them more flesh out and added a voice tone to make the conversation have more emotion in my opinion. Overall, its a nice book and I do suggest the author to split up the long paragraph into two or three. Keep up the good work and good luck